I wish Evelina could have stayed in her body and had the joyful ending. But at least she was able to seek revenge on the clergy that abused her and for those who came before her. Although, I was searching for a true saintess who became disillusioned and corrupted that she turned bad, but still maintained her position as the protagonist; this one almost came close to it.
Authors just can't let a bad girl be bad without turning them into a villainess, or if they remain the main character, they have to have switched transmigrated souls with a pure and virginal person. Balance, I guess.
Lina spent 6 years searching for Aslan along with Latan and she didn't get pregnant again?? Funny.
My hunt continues for a true doctrine weary dark Saintess.
Story score: 1-star.
I was totally waiting for a Saintess who went to the dark-side after being betrayed and killed and then regressing. I got none of that!! >_< I even thought the Monsignor would be part of the dark-side to help her achieve her revenge since she didn't remember him from the first time line. Wasted opportunity.
Then I thought Abigail would be a fighter!! Just flat out scream: "I'm not the Saintess!!" and then punch that dude in the face during her first public meeting. Didn't happen. (Perhaps that's just me and how I would do it.)
Anyway, this was a tedious story about a Mother Goddess who could interfere but doesn't due to her trying to teach an, later apologetic, angel a lesson about getting too arrogant.
To be honest, this story was hard to get into for me and I almost dropped it several times. I stuck around because the humor was absolutely funny and kept me turning pages. The plot not so much as I was able to discern much of the reveals before the official story revelations. (Probably by reading so much of this genre.) However by chapters 65 or 70 the story started getting really interesting and finally grabbed my full attention. Usually I drop stories after about 10 or so chapters if they can't interest me or at least make me rage-read it.
BUT...like I said the plot has picked up significantly and I'm down for it!! My guess: Tez17 isn't actually the real 17th Tez due to the Save Point disk. I don't know if he's right before Reed or after Reed, but he's definitely not #17.
Now back to the latest chapter as I join my fellow readers in unison: 'Dat demon girl has looked in her last mirror for messing with Bia. She'll have to lament her regrets as she is bathed in a raging pool of the the hottest Damnation Hellfire...of the Holy kind.
I believe the Tez we have is the Tez after the 100th loop (After Reed), but not exactly the next loop/future of the Reed we see here. Since we were shown that Tez was actually the soul that was being punished in the abyss and the og story having revealed that the outcome of Reed destroying the world was to be forever unable to die, it means when Allie entered the unknown dungeon to retrieve the disk at exactly the moment when Tez's soul was about to die, she prevented the disk from "respawning" Tez's soul (the save point being the abyss) and allowed him to die. His soul then probably took over the Tez of the timeline Allie is in. That's one of my theories or what the plot seems to lead.
However, it seems like our Tez is aware about the fact there is a god in his world even though he should know that the original TM god had abandoned it, because multiple times when the Merchant Lady god attacked him, he was aware there was an anomaly/divine presence preventing him from searching the disk; though, it was probably a misunderstanding from the Merchant Lady since she thought there was a presence trying to hurt Allie. Going back to my point, our Tez unlike Reed seems to be more conscious over the fact the world might be a "system". The sub-plot of the TM gods revealed that there was a soul that probably got bugged. We know that it is Tez.
What I am wondering about is if our Tez is actually a bug that came from a glitch that either got duplicated by accident, where our Tez was a Reed that went through the og storyline without ever meeting Allie in his 100th loop and the present Reed being the 100th loop Tez that the system (TM gods) "designed" for the 17th loop timeline where Allie; or both our Tez and Reed are the same Ted where the Reed we see was the loop our Tez had gone through. If it is the second, it means our Tez, who was our present Reed, had been defeated and punished, and that outcome leading to Allie saving him again to become her Tez.
My head hurts from thinking, but it would be a really nice Paradox. I keep thinking the sin our Tez keeps spouting that he committed might have been having either harmed or killed his Allie, but I know it can't be possible because, first of all, Allie is a transmigrator whose soul cannot be duplicated so we would know if she ever had been harmed or killed.
idk there is still much that I want know like why did the Strict Order and Goodness abandonned the project (lol and him being the chairman's son), and what is the real story of Tez. Maybe he is the og Tez from the novel that had gotten memories of the 17th Tez that met Allie. Just why is this story so good
Hmmm...I like your soul theory. It's got me thinking about when Tez woke up in that cabin unable to speak and he definitely didn't recognize Allie.
Theory Time: Fake #17 Tez is the bug from the original TM universe that didn't have an Allie in it. His world all played out as intended with the infinite loops. Soul Tez got trapped in the abyss dungeon with the Save Point disk and was slowly either withering away or getting corrupted by the endless darkness. Remember Allie said she felt afraid of the presence in the dungeon. And because that Tez never had an Allie in it he was on the offense and aggressive. So, Allie grabs the disk and releases Soul Tez from the dungeon. ST has nowhere to go, so he sticks close to Allie until she meets up with 17T. Once 17T gets wounded ST uses that chance to take over/merge with the body. That's why it took 17T a longer time to heal and speak as those two were merging memories and strengths. Now that ST has fully merged with 17's body and has 17's memories he's starting to question all the oddities surrounding Allie that 17T looked over as Allie being Allie. However with no Allie in the original timeline, ST is trying to see if Allie is indeed a gift sent by the gods or further punishment for his sin. I think Soul Tez's sin is he abandoned his world to die in that abyss dungeon.
That's exactly what I'm thinking! The whole setting for this manhwa is hella interesting. I usually can predict some plot points, but there is so many things that can happen.
It's a mix of all the fun qualities of the isekai genre. It's been awhile since I read something so good. Hopefully, the chap where Bia is saved comes soon, and we can finally get to see Allie beat the Magic Nation's asses for looking down on our hella charistmatic saintess lmao
Great minds at work here!! *high five*
Interesting first couple of chapters, but then nothing but smut the rest of the way. No real plot development. Waste of my time.
You expected a lot in 4 chapters lol.
A lot can happen in just 4 chapters and this one just proves nothing can happen in just 4 chapters, too.
At lot can, yes but by skipping information and timeskip lmao
Here a 3 good examples that I rated from 4 to 3 stars which gets across the plot and smut without being waste of time. Our opinions may differ.
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/how_to_get_rid_of_a_husband/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/do_or_die_quest_to_tame_the_big_bad_wolf_uncut/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/zombie_s_dick_is_a_bibibic/
bc its a porn manhwa like cmon its Yaoi, not BL. also not that serious like sometimes a good book can be a smut book
True. A good book can have smut in it. But this isn't one of them. Trash is trash. I see my accurate description rattled some bones around here. Welp, opinions may vary, but trust me, this story was trash.
not rlly you just came off as the type of person that calls an obvious smut book “no plot” / “trash” only because it doesn’t follow your story expectations. Like obviously the only plot is skin slapping. Its not like a fairytale where a lesson shall be learned at the end. I don’t disagree that the concept was sorta trashy but then again there realy was none to begin with. Just dicks and balls was really all I cared about.
Agree to disagree. As I pointed out to a previous commenter, where I linked 3 different stories, that were 4 chapters or less, that had smut in them, but still maintained a plot with the usage of smut so it could/can be done. It just wasn't done here.
And since we were after different things -- this is obviously your treasure and my trash. Although it is trash.
The summary drew me in, so I started reading it with a few expectations that were quickly debunked. I guess my expectations were too high, because I barely liked anything about this story. The one thing that I truly liked was the rapist wasn't the father in the main story, but that joy was only shortlived as the rapist in the side couple was the father.
While I was happy the prosecutor (rapist 1) wasn't the father, I couldn't help but hope he and the other Alpha would come to an agreement and form an unconventional family unit with the feisty little Omega. Oh, well.
Taesoo/Philip & Alejandro (rapist 2) -- Honestly they didn't interest me and I skimmed many of the chapters where they were the main focus. I will say this: Taesoo was a horrible guard. It would have made much more sense if he had joined the prison as a counselor.
I would have preferred spending much more time on a secondary couple if it was the other former juvie Omega who was also an omega chaser.
Lastly: What idot penal system administrator thought locking up omegas and alphas together was a great idea?? It's no different than having females and males share the same prison. Ridiculous!! And don't come at me with it's for the omegas' heat and the alphas' rut. That's why there's suppressants, analgesics, or anesthetics medications. Or if you want to get vulgar give them some lube a dildo or a flesh tube!! Not access to each other!! I don't care how much money the warden was saving; it's irresponsible of the penal system to allow them to use each other for sexual relief.
Current rating: 2 stars.
Okay, a partial lie. It is time regression, but she was never abducted, instead she chose to marry the Northern Grand Duke. Anyway, I was on the verge of dropping this story, when the plot finally decided to make itself interesting.
I do like the double regression part although I wondered why they regressed from different starting points??
Hopefully, Isabella is still alive somehow, but a part of me believes she was sacrificed for black magic.
I wonder if it will be revealed that FL is a descendent of Elves and that's why her hair is pink.
Honestly, I'm more interested in the story behind the guild leader Astin and the 1st (??) Zackadorian prince.
Don't know why this was pulled from my "Already Read" list, but I got an update on it, so I decided to take another glance at it. And, yeah, I now remember why I dropped this one, I can't stand the ML-esper at all. I was glad when he didn't go the route of hurting another esper just to get the guide, but then he went downhill.
I like guideverse stories. And I know that part of a guides duties can range from a single touch to sexual intercourse. However, I like ones where there is some kind of balance between the partners and they gradually get to that level without the usage of coercion, force, or blackmail to achieve it. Otherwise, it's just another form of rape.
This story would have been so much better without that aspect. A haughty esper and a headstrong guide -- both powerful as they fight against and for each other.
When I dropped this one, I gave it a 1-star rating. That rating still stands, but I might pull this one from the trash to see if I'm inclined to follow it to its end.
Yeah exactly bro got punched for being a dick and forced myself to be his partner and then forced himself on the mc for “compatibility” and to establish dominance what is he a child I hate these types of story’s everyone just lets the trash ml do whatever he wants cause he’s “sssssssss+” class
Is this story predictable?? Yes!! But it is really fun!!
I like how Zeke/Sieg despite being reincarnated still treats his descendants with care and encourages them. Even to the ones who were his enemies they, too, are gaining valuable insight on how to get stronger along with life healing lessons. Also I like how he treats them as kids during his life lessons only to have it pointed out that he, too, is still just a child. ^_^ But they still take his lessons to heart.
While I'm looking forward to the time skip, I do hope we spend a little time watching Zeke battle the dragons and grow stronger.
And I hope after the time skip, we finally get introduced to Zeke's siblings, and see how powerful they are being direct descendants of the current Head. I thought Laika was his half-sister, but later chapters make it seem like she's just a cousin.
It was love for Lu Feng the second he saw An Zhe. His intuition and his heart were battling at that first meeting, that's why he ordered the genetic testing done. He wanted to appease both sides of himself. Then he kept "coincidentally" crossing paths with An Zhe basically to make sure his claim on him was known to all.
Change my mind!!
as much as i would love to see them in love i also wanna point out lu feng genuinely believed there was something off about an zhe thus did a genetic testing and he underwent 30 days of checking up on him because no xenogenic can hide for that long (well obviously he doesn’t know that an zhe can). there are so many other better representations of their affection of one another
Mind not changed.
FL should do what the sword said and send her nephew out of Void of Miasma after teaching him all he needs to know and getting him a replacement gift.
And the nephew should leave that place and help clean up his aunt's reputation. Then he should yell at his parents about allowing his aunt's reputation be dragged through the mud after her noble sacrifice...for both of them!!
Because there's no way I'm gonna accept that the nephew is the ML. He's basically the consolation prize that the author prepared since FL couldn't be with her crush. Her nephew is a carbon copy of his father!! The man she loved and the man sent her to her potential death!! Why would the author think this relationship is a good idea?! And I haven't gotten to the pseudo-incest part of this bad idea. The FL has recognized him as her nephew, the son of her adopted sister and her former crush -- she shouldn't be looking at him as a love interest. Ugghhh!!