I do wish some scenes were portrayed more differently, like the sexual assault. While the other sex scenes were fine and dandy, the rape with the old man was very disturbing, in both the way how it was so detailed and not that needed. Yes, we know that the old man is bad, obviously, but seeing how he sexually assaults the bottom in that way lowkirkenly alot. If it wasnt so sexual, I feel like it could've been okay. If that doesn't make sense , I apologize for the poor wording.
I do like how there's a genuine plot behind it, and how in their own way they try to protect each other but they're just digging their own hole. Top has an obsessive sort of love since his highschool days, so it's obvious been a problem that to "protect" the one he likes, he just beats up whoever is bothering them. I like how consistent that part of his character is. It's not like he improved either , it was just hidden until maybe he found someone he actually liked, but it's worse because of all the shit the bottom is in, the top is only going to further his behaviours thar aren't good at all. When he said that he "really likes" the bottom, it didn't feel genuine but it felt like chaining words since he saw how the bottom likes him.
On that note, I think the bottom only likes the top because of the idealized version in his head. He wants to the top to save him, but the only way to do that is more violence. I think if top kills the pedophile bastard old man, the bottom won't immediately become better, and it would be all sunshine and rainbows. The sort of possessiveness the top has will ruin the bottom again too.
Its like theyre just gonna swallow each other up in their own toxicness, labeled in romance.
The art is beautiful, it gives me chills when it gets serious. I wish they had bottoms snake eyes back though, hes just getting more and more cute than scary which is fine, but he was way better non moe-ified
Edited to sound better and less confusing!
It's like that because he was groomed
I know, that's why it's disturbing.
Bruh the translation turns to unreadable shit and it's the reason I couldn't finish reading this all those years back
I really do mourn what this story could've been, it has so much potential but then the author couldn't stop stroking their junk to bull and shit, so this is the outcome we get
Girl same !! Legit mourning rn . I was super defensive(i didn't defend the non-con), believing there will be good development and growth until the latest chapter. Really disappointed
mind you the story is only 30 chapters in
Unfortunately that sort of character growth would have to come from a completely different writer because this one only knows S and A and somehow twisting that to love
I know thats what makes it even worse
Yes ):
Plus I am really disappointed at how the coercive sex turned into a masturbation source for Juhyeok. Like wtf. He was my favorite because of the last chapters but then again...
Tbh I don't even hate juhyeok for this. I am just disappointed in the creator for turning Juhyeok into this. I strongly believe the creator tried to justify that coercive/non-con sex scene with this chapter and force the narrative that Juhyeok actually enjoyed it.
I really don't see Su-ah taking any accountability for his non-con actions in the future.
Only the last parts of the chapters were good and gave an insight and depth to Su-ah and Juhyeok's relationship, and how much Juhyeok must meaning to Su-ah because he not only protected Su-ah physically by fighting off the bullies but protected him from his trauma, was by his side to help him fight it and probably was Su-ah's emotional anchor.
It was most likely Juhyeok who was able to pull Su-ah out of that darkness.
It gave us a proper explanation as to why Su-ah loves Juhyeok so much.
Have you watched Given (japanese bl animanga)? I think Juhyeok is to Su-ah what Yuki is to Mafuyu.
I think that's what they tried to do too, and somehow spin it into a "I can't stop thinking about him >_<!!!!" And then there would be shoujo bubbles in the background to show how romantic its supposed to be
Also, I do think that Su-Ah would take "accountability" and just blame Juhyeok for all the times he sexually assaulted him by saying "I just love you xyz" in that sort of way, and dismissing Juhyeok's feelings because for some reason, Suah's feelings matter more than anything. I think it's very selfish that he left those vials of semen (crazy sentence) without telling him, and also that Juhyeok had to get raped just to go on the trip safely (for others reading this, coercive sex isnt consensual) which would've NEVER been an issue if Suah didn't scent Juhyeok all of his life, after being told repeatedly to stop.
Ignoring all the toxic things, which is ALOT, I feel like their relationship, especially during childhood was quite beautiful. It was nice to see exactly why they, or at least Suah, fell for Juhyeok- to dumb it down completely it was how strong he was, both mentally and physically and if that admiration followed into their adult years with proper respect, I feel like there could've been much better chances of entering a relationship that didn't start on a very wrong foot.
And no, I never read/watched Given as it just didn't grab my attention.
Manager I wasnt familiar with your game, I'm sorry that I said you look like.the spelling of a wet towel! Hes lowkirkenly cute now....
Yoo What
He used to look so fucking ugly but ever since he got plastic surgery hes so cute
I like it, but also I don't.
I think Penelope shouldve went back to her original world, and Callisto gets recarnated into her world (maybe he would be some sort of ceo bull shit like that) so they would infinitely be together.
But also, ig its cool she stays with the people she ...kinda bonded with??? Was it ever answered if Vincent or wtv his name is was saved or did he die
Actually, the ending in the novel was a little different; she had a chance to see her real family again. I don't understand why they didn't show that in the manga.
Yeah, I was just coming back to this comment to expand on it, I have no idea why she doesnt actually go back to her og family and give them a second chance, because obviously there was at least just a sprout of another plot line that they could've taken. Without it, the ending just feels more empty than anything. She spent 213 chapters basically doing all that bull shit just to go home, but she stays just for love? Idk, I guess its romantic but I genuinely wish she did go back to the OG world. The webtoon ending just feels lack luster the more I think about it
Can you tell me what happened more?
After defeating Yvonne, the game gave her two options: stay or return to her own world. I don't remember much, but her real body was still alive but in a coma, she was seeing his father and brothers' remorse and bid them goodbye and chose to return
Ohhh I see, thank you!
Mr.ShoeShiner needs a fag like me to keep him on his toes , the rest of you guys cant have my mans sorry
woah
FUCKKKK IF I WANTED TO SEE STOTIC TOP X CUTE BOTTOM WITH MOE ANIME GIRL EYES I WOULD READ LITERALLY ANY FUCKING POPULAR FAGSLOP ON THE FRONT PAGE GOD DAAAAMMMNITTT I WANTED THE BLACK HAIR TO BOTTOM
anyways, the story was cute- kinda mad that the command abuser dom didnt get like, crazy punishment in that world its akin to sexual assault right? How lame hope he dies.
omg never have i ever seen someone say fagslop hahahaha, that shit took me the fuck out, ive probably been laughing for a good 5 minutes now. thank you for that, i needed a good laugh
There are many stories with black haired ukes, in my 15yrs reading Yaoi I encountered a dom bottom and sub top only once!
I dont care that he has black hair, its more so his personality is the reason why I want him to bottom
You can find cry baby pussy bitch ass bottoms anywhere , the only "ground breaking" thing here is that he's a dom, but a useless one at that
Glad I could make you laugh
For stoic bottoms you have the wrong genre, Yaoi doesn't do that, Bara has stoic bottoms.
1.) Why reply then block me bozo ass nigga its my reply chain
2.) Youre just straight up wrong, bara is a sub category of yaoi, stotic bottoms can be anywhere
I’m pretty sure I know of a few stoic bottom manga! I’ll try find them and link them cause I do love me some stoic bottoms as well
Though I can’t say I hated this, cause it’s at least a start for Dom bottoms!
Come kiss me on my hot mouth im feeling romantical cuz of that thank you beautiful ♡
Lmao I had CaseOh in the background and he said that(the first section anyway lol) just before I read your comment haha
Anyway I’m sorry it took so long! I did my best to find as many of them as possible but I have never financially recovered from the great reading lists wipe… anyway-
https://www.mangago.me/recommend-manga/ookami_sama_no_koiwazurai/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/seiheki_strike/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/shishunki_cherry_bullet/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/renai_tsuu/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/i_need_you_too_maybe/ (This one might be grasping at straws but like- somewhat…)
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_beast_that_yearns_to_be_tamed/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/exotic_love/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_pizza_delivery_man_and_the_gold_palace/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/define_the_relationship/
Some might kinda be more- emotionally stunted than stoic lads but I hope there’s one or two that can scratch that itch anyway
The story could be interesting, but the pacing is so absolutely shit that its confusing. It genuinely seems like the author just wants to draw sex with no real plot behind it, which is unfortunate. Can't finish this because of how its written/the pacing
Don't worry, by now we know your opinion is not worth anything.
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