I heard this is supposed to be a short story. I need a story like this There’s no FL who gets distracted from her plan when ML shows up and falls in love There’s only an FL who survives, without the help of magical powers and without above-average intelligence This FL truly embodies what it means to be a ‘woman’ Like, women are strong, but they’re also vulnerable.
This kind of refreshing i guess.
Each chapter is filled with suspense because the FL can’t afford to make any mistakes if she doesn’t want to turn back time because her blessing (now feel like a curse). And here, the king is portrayed as someone who is truly feared, not a foolish king who’s merely hungry for power and women, as is common in most manhwa.
He even keeps the FL around just for his own amusement, like a predator toying with its prey.
With all due respect, but why the plot is not plotting? I'm starting to get bored
that's how stories work lol. Do you know what a story structure is?
There must be a rising action and exposition before the climax can begin and even that is before the falling action and conclusion.
We are still in the rising action part of the story. The climax is nowhere close. She has to gain allies and pull together enough strength to actually defeat him. If she did so now, she would lose once again.
I get what you mean. But in my case, what’s boring me is how the romance between the FL and the ML is dampening my enthusiasm for reading. I’m reading this because I heard the FL holds a deep grudge against her ex (she’s been betrayed and killed by him more than once).
At the beginning of the chapter, I was really caught up in the excitement because she was enthusiastically plotting her revenge, and I was eager to see how she’d carry it out. But when the ML showed up, the romance started, and several new characters appeared, I felt like the sense of hatred I’d shared with the FL at the first chapter just faded away and felt flat.
I’m not blaming any of the characters here. I’m just sharing my opinion about the development of certain characters, which I feel isn’t necessary to focus on right now, since I’d prefer the FL to stay focused on her revenge.








I already read the novel until the latest chapter and I'm gonna tell you... This is more fucked up than the Kanna Addis one
ouu shittings u js got me even more invested. How fucked up?
It's like you throw up, and then you sip that vomit again, little by little
It's like you throw up, and then you sip that vomit again, little by little