In chapter 118 she mentions she already 12, The story starts her at 8, she has her 10th birthday, and now shes 12? Maybe the author has just been using her saying her age randomly to show the time progressing without having to say directly there was a time skip?
she has now healed/shown control over wolf, snake, and flower. I think there was mention of a fox family in the chapter 11/12 lore/introduction of major families/founding myth, but they seem to have abandoned that family plot wise? So as far as we know, lily has shown control over the families like alteris did when he turned the monsters of the current world into humans so the magicians who listens to god could live safely. I think Sol/raven family is already loyal to her, but i figure we much be getting close to the end. Maybe this will be the last season but i really want to see all the kids grown up and happy, and alteris too
Riftan is not going to change. He is the measuring stick of maxi’s progress. If this story telling device/mechanic bothers you, I assure he’s not going to get much better, his POV doesn’t help that much, leave lmao. If riftan became more modern in his thinking, Maxi’s target would essentially be getting easier. She literally couldn’t talk to him before, but now she speaking her mind and being open and not even stuttering. I’m sorry this isn’t a brain dead story with straightforward characters. every fucking chapter people bitch about riftan for not being a modern ML when it’s clearly the middle ages is insane. So I’m saying it, he doesn’t get better. Leave. Come back when it’s over if you want but leave for now!
If you google the Korean name 119 other sites have it up in English. I guess mangago just isn’t updated as quickly.
I actually like Ian, it’s clear from even his first assault on Ben that he wants Ben to like it if he can. Like the villain with morals. He does foreplay, stops when Ben is unconscious, and does aftercare. Regardless yes 100% rape, and you cannot erase that fact by showing us a worse form of assault…this author has entirely abandoned the plot to seemingly backtrack and try to use a disgusting gang rape scene as perhaps a way to juxtapose with Ian?
Unnecessary, weak writing, lost me, and I actually liked Ian anyway.
No intelligence from Ben, not background on his mother, her necklace, the guy Karma Ian wanted to trade for with the CBI, legit just fucking nothing. All. Benzo can be a third wheel wedge character?
In the sense that riftan is one of the most unique MLs because he’s also the antagonist. He antagonizes maxi!s growth. Stop hating the thing that makes this a unique and good story. This is her growing to be strong. She’s not a typical OP from the start transmigrator or time traveler. She legit starts out weak and trying to fill the shoes of the wife, but immediately realizes those aren’t shoes she’s gonna wear. We just finished the prologue lmao
I wouldn’t be as upset not seeing their future together (since we can assume all the day dreams basically happened) if we had at least gotten to an actual confession at some point? I like how we kinda saw, in parallel their 0 to 40% progression with their like, end game 60 to 100%, but we never got the 40-60 of them actually confessing? Like, the middle/climax is missing!
The smut is kinda getting unrealistically boring with the same giant dick -> Ben passes out. I need more of Ben connecting with and caring about his own mother’s relationship to a mafia and the necklace. Also actually showing us why hes a CBI agent! The fish this was a big nothing
I read this back in high school and thought it was fine, even emotional and well written, but rereading it now 14 years later the issues are issuing lmaooo
He asked her if she’d come find him and she will! This is just an artifact but she a real mage!
but basically some very key points:
Ben was looking for a drug ring connected to Ian. Very vewfinder-type falling in love=ian got a boner trying to choke Ben to death during their first encounter but genuinely loves how innocent he is.Ben is held as a hostage in exchange for info on the CBI mole in ian’s org, but the director basically says to keep Ben, giving up on him.Ben is constantly trying to figure out if Ian is a reasonably good guy or not (as far as mafia goes) after realizing Ian is not directly tied to the drug ring, but recognizes even his own CBI agents have murdered people, he’s opposed on principle as we see from his target practice. So basically he doesn’t mind Ian killing people if it’s because they betrayed him or were otherwise dangerous anyway.Ben is conflicted about his own loyalty to CBI because they killed his mother, but also acknowledges she was secretly mafia which you will have potentially missed reading the quick translation. Right now Ian and Ben were happy but Ian is trying to basically clean up the dirty business around him and exit the mafia to be with Ben. Ben is conflicted because he does like Ian but has had some obvious trust rollercoaster issues with him, but wants to not let Ian who he now sees as reasonably innocent die/take the fall for things he didn’t directly do. Yes this is all ignoring that he genuinely killed the white haired politician, but it’s grey because he was bought out anyway,,, so by Ben’s moral compass, is okay because Ian killed someone who wasn’t fully innocent. To some extent, Ben and Ian are forming a relationship from physical compatibility first which is a fairly …”classic/traditional” BL trope?
Okay, so either little and older Cyril are different cousins, or Cyril is Odell’s son and not Arthur’s? I recall early on thinking the time line was a little crunched for Cyril to be Arthur’s son since gautier wasn’t that old either
i cant even. I had to go back a chapter to realize this one started with both a recap then a flashback to content not previously shown. Horrible story boarding. She does all this shit to get petios out, doesn’t talk to him, doesn’t get closure, also kills him her self by locking him in the shed maybe? And she couldn’t find Daniel earlier but suddenly she can? I’m like, giving up. The smut isn’t even that good
Does this feel like modern retelling of Viewfinder vibes? I think that’s why I accept and love how trashy this is? It feels like a modern take on an older style of classic Yaoi? I think the readers who didn’t live through asami ryuichi are one camp and those of us who did are another lmao
Maxi dont listen to the haters! Her speech is improving. Instead of stuttering she’s pausing. Her eyes are more focused. She’s about to hit a massive growth spurt guys just hold on the real story begins at the end of this!
The ML really doesn’t seem interested at all in the protagonist. I have no clue where this is headed
Ok yes they’re tall but why in the hallucination of the dead uncle did he have huge honkers?