The pacing is weird in the last chapters but it feels like a revamp/homage to the viewfinder series/era of yaoi which have aged like fine milk, but im not NOT here for it
Calling it now: the FBI may have been the ones to kill her family? I can’t think of an ending where they end up together that fits all the character pieces so far other than that the FBI actually killed her family
The actual plot and politics actually moved these two chapters keep going, don’t go back to something stupid
Lmao is that senshi? I see a helmet and big wok/pan and the character’s back is always turned but I don’t think that’s namari in those panels first panel with the red dragon and the little panel when chilchuk is asking if they’re going in circles. Love seeing kinda “pilot episode pannels” left over
Mikhail looks like a child in this art style and has no sexual appeal…..reading this chapter was such a let down because the smut was bad and they didn’t talk at all about their past lives
She so smart but hasn’t considered a bit he recognizes her. Why would she assume he’s 100% convinced she’s dead. He probably made sure she was shot in a way she wouldn’t have died in the first place.
Jakar clearly was picking upon the situation and was there for the conversation, pleaseeeeee he needs to be the middleman!
Something about the contrived drama, the quick wins, and super sappiness….but like, it’d be a pretty good harlequin novel
I don’t mind smut but I feel like the plot itself could be fairly interesting, so I’d rather not have these long smut intermissions :/ like, give me plot, end the story, give spicy side stories or something idk, the plot is too interesting and unrelated to sex for this kind of break imo
Recall, shuraka was young for his generation, especially since his father was murdered and couldn’t produce more heirs. the fact that his peerage is mostly older is not strange. The ladies are almost certainly politically concubines.
Two theories for the man: either he took him to practice on to not hurt tei, or he is Obaran’s lover, recall in the original flashback, the one older brother who talks to tei after the poisoning mentions “Obaran’s deviousness must have rubbed off on shuraka” where I was assuming he was talking about taking a male bride
I know we have long commented on the art style being much less detailed than the first chapter, but DAMN, THE FUCKING REFLECTION in the floor showing eve instead holding miller as a parallel for her trying to also save him like, idea 1000% even if execution has only been 80%. Fucking artistic as hell.
What about Lucy? Doesn’t she also have to get reborn and meet the reborn remiel? How is this the end?
It’s sweet how much they like each other but I really miss their awkward funny mmo banter. Was here for the comedy but will stay for the spice.