she has now healed/shown control over wolf, snake, and flower. I think there was mention of a fox family in the chapter 11/12 lore/introduction of major families/founding myth, but they seem to have abandoned that family plot wise? So as far as we know, lily has shown control over the families like alteris did when he turned the monsters of the current world into humans so the magicians who listens to god could live safely. I think Sol/raven family is already loyal to her, but i figure we much be getting close to the end. Maybe this will be the last season but i really want to see all the kids grown up and happy, and alteris too
Riftan is not going to change. He is the measuring stick of maxi’s progress. If this story telling device/mechanic bothers you, I assure he’s not going to get much better, his POV doesn’t help that much, leave lmao. If riftan became more modern in his thinking, Maxi’s target would essentially be getting easier. She literally couldn’t talk to him before, but now she speaking her mind and being open and not even stuttering. I’m sorry this isn’t a brain dead story with straightforward characters. every fucking chapter people bitch about riftan for not being a modern ML when it’s clearly the middle ages is insane. So I’m saying it, he doesn’t get better. Leave. Come back when it’s over if you want but leave for now!
I actually like Ian, it’s clear from even his first assault on Ben that he wants Ben to like it if he can. Like the villain with morals. He does foreplay, stops when Ben is unconscious, and does aftercare. Regardless yes 100% rape, and you cannot erase that fact by showing us a worse form of assault…this author has entirely abandoned the plot to seemingly backtrack and try to use a disgusting gang rape scene as perhaps a way to juxtapose with Ian?
Unnecessary, weak writing, lost me, and I actually liked Ian anyway.
No intelligence from Ben, not background on his mother, her necklace, the guy Karma Ian wanted to trade for with the CBI, legit just fucking nothing. All. Benzo can be a third wheel wedge character?
In the sense that riftan is one of the most unique MLs because he’s also the antagonist. He antagonizes maxi!s growth. Stop hating the thing that makes this a unique and good story. This is her growing to be strong. She’s not a typical OP from the start transmigrator or time traveler. She legit starts out weak and trying to fill the shoes of the wife, but immediately realizes those aren’t shoes she’s gonna wear. We just finished the prologue lmao
I wouldn’t be as upset not seeing their future together (since we can assume all the day dreams basically happened) if we had at least gotten to an actual confession at some point? I like how we kinda saw, in parallel their 0 to 40% progression with their like, end game 60 to 100%, but we never got the 40-60 of them actually confessing? Like, the middle/climax is missing!






In chapter 118 she mentions she already 12, The story starts her at 8, she has her 10th birthday, and now shes 12? Maybe the author has just been using her saying her age randomly to show the time progressing without having to say directly there was a time skip?