I don't know, the plot feels really rushed.
One second he's a new worker, and the next the bottom is already avoiding him while also flirting with him and picturing him while fucking a women. Then suddenly there's a crazy ex, the MC kind of looks like the bottom, he gets hit over the head with a bottle with no bleeding or real
consequences, and then boom they're already having sex???
Honestly, it feels like the author tried to cram 30 chapters worth of plot into the span of 5 chapters.
Also, the sex wasn't really what I expected.
We see the black-haired guy having sex with a woman who's tied up and gagged, but when he and the MC get together, all he does is tie his hands. The contract made it seem like there was going to be a lot more to their dynamic, so that felt a little underwhelming.
Also I’m very curious on how a woman’s perfume got onto the keychain unless he had it with her while he was fucking her???
Idk plot seems all over the place but the art is good.
My opinion ik im picky so maybe someone of yall loved the plot. Please don’t get mad at my opinion (づ￣ ³￣)づ
The plot was something but in middle it just was rushed and honestly didn’t make sense half the time. As for the art when they have sex it looks a bit off sometimes in terms of their faces. As well as the dirty talk kinda threw me off just a little cus how much there was like I thought the ML was supposed to be shy but damn can he say some stuff LOL.
Also bro he’s pregnant but his stomach looks flatter than mine like hello? The baby is gonna be so small.
Overall it could’ve been better if the plots weren’t all over the place.
Got me fucked UPPPP!
Stop because why was I reading this on a different website and tell me why the male lead like I’m pretty sure messing around with another guy who will show up later in the chapters because he invited him back to his place and tell me why he was changing the sheets and a condom fell off and then he throws it away. He’s like OK take your clothes off again bitch take your clothes off again. What do you mean?
I’m literally gonna throw up like I feel like throwing up holy shit. I’m actually pissed me off so badly and I feel like I’m the one getting cheated on even though I know they’re not in relationship and they’re just like messing around as so-called friends, but that doesn’t change how I feel okay
Like I hope it’s just a misunderstanding and they’re not actually doing anything and that he’s genuinely just teaching him but it looks like he’s messing around behind the main characters back and you know he’s super dense so he probably wouldn’t see it like that but oh my God I feel like throwing up like my stomach is turning. I won’t pick this up until I get spoils that he isn’t cheating because I CANT. This is the first time I genuinely can’t keep reading bc I let my emotions take over. ╥﹏╥
I read yo to like ch 15-16
I've been searching frantically for spoilers because of this and they said it's not like that. We've been led on to think they sleep together but they didn't. It's the spoiler from reddit
But just to be sure I recommend waiting for people who actually read the raws to clarify before to continue reading this again. I felt like that before when reading Mousetrap so I'm pretty cautious now
No es así ... Jajajaja somos mal pensadas.
Tranquilas, ninguno de los dos es malo.
Solo unos bobos
I’m a bit relieved now. Are they messing around at all (touching ect) or is this just a bit misunderstanding because my heart can’t handle ts. ╥﹏╥
I googled this and thank you sm for this makes me feel better.(￣∇￣")
What I got from reddit is that the other guy showed ml porn as a form of advice#－.－)
No, jajaja
El pelo negro estaba practicando con alguien... Ese alguien... Era unos actores pornos que enseñaban a como prepararse para el acto sexual. Fue tierno y bobo a la vez.
El moreno sospecho igual que nosotras que él pelo negro estaba practicando con alguien más, corrió a su casa y le pregunto.
Es muy graciosa toda la escena. Y muestra la inocencia y ternura para mí.
El de pelo negro parecerá asexual pero está súper apegado al moreno y no quiere tocar a nadie más.
Oh thank you so much for clarifying. I had half a mind to put this on hold but I will continue to read it again.
You saved me a lot of future pain, thank you so much !! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Honestly, idc what excuses everyone has for treating the FL so badly in her first life. I still hate them and will continue to do so because regardless of what they had to do and whatever blah blah the FL lost her life and was a puppet for her first life. She was tricked and killed despite just wanting to be loved. I don’t care if in this life they suddenly feel bad and whatever it doesn’t change SHIT for me Lolol.
Also I’m glad everyone/ mostly everyone has a dislike for the Ml makes me happy to seeヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
The way it becomes even clear how sad fls life was in lesiturds flashback. Like everyone knew she was desperate n genuine. N they all dismissed it. Yah no. Leave them
Her ex makes my skin crawl!
Shouldve kicked him where the sun don’t shine.
I was thinking the same thing. Persistent people like that and are jerks to boot, possibly need some ball crushing to make a point.
God hurry and make this pain and suffering end. I knew he’ll bleed when the Mf just shoved it in there.
Is it bad I’m pissed off with like everyone?
Like stop fucking, act like adults and talk.
Wow rape :/
I was waiting for these chapters for awhile to kick it up again just for there to be rape..ugh yea disappointing. They really need to get rid of how common rape is in BL now cus god damn.
In all honesty, we can’t blame the main character because she’s only 10 years old and obviously she’s gonna want to love at her parents and grandparents and siblings.
But I’m not gonna lie I still dislike the grandpa because yes, he had to keep a distance for her safety and I understand that, but to a certain degree, that can only do so much like he should’ve kept tabs on her. He should’ve been making sure she was getting meals that she wasn’t being abused and neglected. And due to him not considering that people were gonna treat her terribly because she hasn’t manifest her powers and blame her. She was abuse neglected, and probably starved at some point.
I’m not gonna blame her siblings too much. They were still young and obviously couldn’t really do anything. As for the youngest obviously he did something wrong like he shouldn’t hate her just because she was born the way she was born, but like again, he also lost his mother, but I’m not trying to excuse his actions. He still like kind of like a yellow flag to me..
as for Dad, I can’t blame him either because he left to protect her and he couldn’t come back until she manifest his powers obviously though he should’ve like bugged his dad/the grandpa more to keep tabs on his daughter and to make sure she’s well loved and everything. Also he should’ve tried to contact her, like I know he had to leave for her and take her place in pretty sure he could’ve sent a letter (maybe he did I dropped at ch 8 cus it was getting boring so idk lmk if he did)
Overall, I’m not gonna say no one has a fault to how badly she was like abused and neglected because I feel like everyone does hold some parts in that I feel like the gramps was the most to blame.
Just my opinion though and how I took everything in.
I absolutely agree. The grandfather is the most to blame, then the father, then the youngest son then the eldest son (him being deliberately distant even just somewhat does not help her already bad situation at all, after all), imo. Oberon was being controlled so I cannot blame him at all.
For me, the plot is kind of confusing because what do you mean she followed her long-term crush into a college waiting for him to finally recognize her for someone more than his friend sister and what do you mean She was waiting for all his relationships to end and low-key was playing on their downfall and then all of a sudden a new guy comes up a misunderstanding happens. She forgets about her first love, and she just acting like her first love never existed. We haven’t seen him ever since like the first chapter anymore, like what happened I thought she loved him like she literally followed him to college just for her to completely forget about him. And for me, the fact that Male lead fell in love with her so quickly kind of wild to me seeing how like he was never interested in anybody else, but you’re telling me all of a sudden he falls in love with the first girl he sees at the bar who makes eye contact with him, kind of wild to me.