I loved the plot and how ppl who deserve their happy ending, got it.
BUT in all honesty I was surprised the FL even fell for the ML during the first 30 chapters. I mean let’s be honest he was a total dick(not his fault ik) to her and never trusted her. Which I know it’s not his fault but it surprises me when the FLs fall for MLs when they’re still acting like assholes. During those 30 chapters he never took her side and treated her bad so it surprised me when she even developed a little bit of feelings towards him.
Guys this is not to blame him or anything like that. She’s just surprised me with how someone can develop feelings for someone who is it treating them poorly. I know he was being controlled and all this and I’m not blaming him at all. I’m just kinda like pointing out how her feelings surprise me in a way. And in all honesty didn’t make since to me but I’m happy they fell in love and had kids who R so CUTE.
IM ON HIS SIDE. Look dont get me wrong I feel for the FL but she does take the other brother for granted and treats him like less then compared to the brown hair brother. AND NOW she’s kissing him while the black hair one is hurt!! Girl at least go after him or something.
Yee Ik it’s a three way but I still see his side, he clearly always liked the FL and was hurt by always being second compared to his brother ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Ngl the dark hair dude more my style. The ML is literally in a chasing phase rn bc she’s not like “everyone else” and isn’t chasing him which is ehh. Also why is it always a man-whore and a virgin FL?
I want it the other way around for ONCE.
Yeah, I fucking hated this. Every second I got to chapter 40 I hated every second of it. I thought eventually you know the main character will fight back and shit like that. he has been, but of course, his fucking rapist kept coming back and marking him eventually turn him into Omega and that pissed me off so bad because he said he didn’t wanna be treated like a kid yet he fucking acted like one and kept raping him and sa him and marking him and making him change his body which he didn’t wanna do he wanted to stay beta, but of course, the toxic plot fucking changed his body into an omega like why.
If you’re like me and get pissed off by annoying ML, who are toxic and controlling and think raping, someone is the only way to control them fully and forcing them into changing into something they didn’t wanna be that then I 100% don’t recommend reading this. Like don’t get me wrong. I enjoy some parts of this like the twins. I like their characters but it’s basically just rape and eventually the person who’s getting raped thinking it’s OK now.
Hmm the sex scenes aren’t bad don’t get me wrong BUT I can’t help but notice our ML doesn’t looks like he feels anything from fucking. Like ik im weird for noticing it but he always has a straight face while the Mc is screaming and moaning in pleasure maybe it’s bc he’s an alien so he doesn’t feel pleasure but he gets hard???
Idk ik it’s something small but it’s bugs me a little bc the Mc seems to be the only one feeling it
What’s the age gap??
He kinda feels likes he’s 30 or sum
For me, the plot is kind of confusing because what do you mean she followed her long-term crush into a college waiting for him to finally recognize her for someone more than his friend sister and what do you mean She was waiting for all his relationships to end and low-key was playing on their downfall and then all of a sudden a new guy comes up a misunderstanding happens. She forgets about her first love, and she just acting like her first love never existed. We haven’t seen him ever since like the first chapter anymore, like what happened I thought she loved him like she literally followed him to college just for her to completely forget about him. And for me, the fact that Male lead fell in love with her so quickly kind of wild to me seeing how like he was never interested in anybody else, but you’re telling me all of a sudden he falls in love with the first girl he sees at the bar who makes eye contact with him, kind of wild to me.
I don't know, the plot feels really rushed.
One second he's a new worker, and the next the bottom is already avoiding him while also flirting with him and picturing him while fucking a women. Then suddenly there's a crazy ex, the MC kind of looks like the bottom, he gets hit over the head with a bottle with no bleeding or real
consequences, and then boom they're already having sex???
Honestly, it feels like the author tried to cram 30 chapters worth of plot into the span of 5 chapters.
Also, the sex wasn't really what I expected.
We see the black-haired guy having sex with a woman who's tied up and gagged, but when he and the MC get together, all he does is tie his hands. The contract made it seem like there was going to be a lot more to their dynamic, so that felt a little underwhelming.
Also I’m very curious on how a woman’s perfume got onto the keychain unless he had it with her while he was fucking her???
Idk plot seems all over the place but the art is good.
My opinion ik im picky so maybe someone of yall loved the plot. Please don’t get mad at my opinion (づ￣ ³￣)づ
The plot was something but in middle it just was rushed and honestly didn’t make sense half the time. As for the art when they have sex it looks a bit off sometimes in terms of their faces. As well as the dirty talk kinda threw me off just a little cus how much there was like I thought the ML was supposed to be shy but damn can he say some stuff LOL.
Also bro he’s pregnant but his stomach looks flatter than mine like hello? The baby is gonna be so small.
Overall it could’ve been better if the plots weren’t all over the place.
Got me fucked UPPPP!
Stop because why was I reading this on a different website and tell me why the male lead like I’m pretty sure messing around with another guy who will show up later in the chapters because he invited him back to his place and tell me why he was changing the sheets and a condom fell off and then he throws it away. He’s like OK take your clothes off again bitch take your clothes off again. What do you mean?
I’m literally gonna throw up like I feel like throwing up holy shit. I’m actually pissed me off so badly and I feel like I’m the one getting cheated on even though I know they’re not in relationship and they’re just like messing around as so-called friends, but that doesn’t change how I feel okay
Like I hope it’s just a misunderstanding and they’re not actually doing anything and that he’s genuinely just teaching him but it looks like he’s messing around behind the main characters back and you know he’s super dense so he probably wouldn’t see it like that but oh my God I feel like throwing up like my stomach is turning. I won’t pick this up until I get spoils that he isn’t cheating because I CANT. This is the first time I genuinely can’t keep reading bc I let my emotions take over. ╥﹏╥
I read yo to like ch 15-16
Is “ Such a 14-year-old” on here?
Honestly, idc what excuses everyone has for treating the FL so badly in her first life. I still hate them and will continue to do so because regardless of what they had to do and whatever blah blah the FL lost her life and was a puppet for her first life. She was tricked and killed despite just wanting to be loved. I don’t care if in this life they suddenly feel bad and whatever it doesn’t change SHIT for me Lolol.
Also I’m glad everyone/ mostly everyone has a dislike for the Ml makes me happy to seeヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Her ex makes my skin crawl!
Shouldve kicked him where the sun don’t shine.
God hurry and make this pain and suffering end. I knew he’ll bleed when the Mf just shoved it in there.
Is it bad I’m pissed off with like everyone?
Like stop fucking, act like adults and talk.
Wow rape :/
I was waiting for these chapters for awhile to kick it up again just for there to be rape..ugh yea disappointing. They really need to get rid of how common rape is in BL now cus god damn.
In all honesty, we can’t blame the main character because she’s only 10 years old and obviously she’s gonna want to love at her parents and grandparents and siblings.
But I’m not gonna lie I still dislike the grandpa because yes, he had to keep a distance for her safety and I understand that, but to a certain degree, that can only do so much like he should’ve kept tabs on her. He should’ve been making sure she was getting meals that she wasn’t being abused and neglected. And due to him not considering that people were gonna treat her terribly because she hasn’t manifest her powers and blame her. She was abuse neglected, and probably starved at some point.
I’m not gonna blame her siblings too much. They were still young and obviously couldn’t really do anything. As for the youngest obviously he did something wrong like he shouldn’t hate her just because she was born the way she was born, but like again, he also lost his mother, but I’m not trying to excuse his actions. He still like kind of like a yellow flag to me..
as for Dad, I can’t blame him either because he left to protect her and he couldn’t come back until she manifest his powers obviously though he should’ve like bugged his dad/the grandpa more to keep tabs on his daughter and to make sure she’s well loved and everything. Also he should’ve tried to contact her, like I know he had to leave for her and take her place in pretty sure he could’ve sent a letter (maybe he did I dropped at ch 8 cus it was getting boring so idk lmk if he did)
Overall, I’m not gonna say no one has a fault to how badly she was like abused and neglected because I feel like everyone does hold some parts in that I feel like the gramps was the most to blame.
Just my opinion though and how I took everything in.
I like the plot and I like how there’s not really any romance in here and they kind of just push it off as a joke but like I wish they would add more male characters don’t get me wrong. I know there’s quite a bit in here, but I feel like every time they add a really interesting character like an actual powerful character. It’s always a female you know and don’t give me wrong. I also love, powerful female characters. I just feel like that’s always the case when they introduce a new powerful character like the elf or the frog or the beast women you get what I’m saying. I also was kind of disappointed when they turn the leopard into like a girl because I thought this was gonna be like a cute little friendship with just a pet leopard following him around making sure he’s safe and everything. But now it feels like they’re prob gonna turn that later into a romance side plot later. Hopefully no romance shows up later in terms of actual development and stuff.
Definitely think the FL dad gonna end up with the blonde lady.
Yes I don’t remember names (๑•ㅂ•)و✧