beta
just caught up and i'm so???? like the authors art is so pretty but the dialogue/plot is so.....lacking. if i have to hear the ml say "live in the world/cage i created for you" or "don't do it with those bastards do it with me" ONE MORE TIME........it's getting really old and as a girl who LIVES for toxic jealousy....this ain't it like bro doesn't even do anything.....he's just cringe
and ok every chapter feels like an au of another chapter?? and it makes entirely NO sense that the ml is homophobic and thinks it's dirty to be turned on by another man- and then so readily offers to be fwb......like huh. the art is cute and all but the story is so so bad...and not even in a red flag kinda way like it's just nonsense atp.
the ml isn't even the fun kind of obsessed.....he's just the embarrassing/creepy kind of obsessed like if ur gonna write a yandere esc. character then at least go all in......he's ok w the bottom having a wife but doesn't like girls flirting w him....he hates gay ppl but rails the bottom at the first chance.....it's not giving, i'm sorry
I totally agree with you, this story makes no sense at all. That’s why I dropped it （￣へ￣）
hopefully the author is having the mc be so unlikable in the beginning so that there can be potential character development later on?