hopefully the author is having the mc be so unlikable in the beginning so that there can be potential character development later on?
just caught up and i'm so???? like the authors art is so pretty but the dialogue/plot is so.....lacking. if i have to hear the ml say "live in the world/cage i created for you" or "don't do it with those bastards do it with me" ONE MORE TIME........it's getting really old and as a girl who LIVES for toxic jealousy....this ain't it like bro doesn't even do anything.....he's just cringe
and ok every chapter feels like an au of another chapter?? and it makes entirely NO sense that the ml is homophobic and thinks it's dirty to be turned on by another man- and then so readily offers to be fwb......like huh. the art is cute and all but the story is so so bad...and not even in a red flag kinda way like it's just nonsense atp.
the ml isn't even the fun kind of obsessed.....he's just the embarrassing/creepy kind of obsessed like if ur gonna write a yandere esc. character then at least go all in......he's ok w the bottom having a wife but doesn't like girls flirting w him....he hates gay ppl but rails the bottom at the first chance.....it's not giving, i'm sorry
i'm bored to death i cant believe we wait 10 days every time for...this like at least at the beginning the plot was moving forward. ever since they went to america or whatever the plot has been moving at a LITERAL snails pace like pls.... no one CARES about jaekyung's fights or him and jumin's little bitch battle idk why i keep coming back to check on this trash but it's literally getting so bad? and why do jaekyung's abs look like ice cubes square ass mfs the author's drawings have been losing quality too bc tell me why i laugh every time jaekyung looks angry. his only good trait is that he's handsome but whenever she draws him with an expression other than a neutral face he looks SO UGLY
it's not even interesting from an abuse victim standpoint anymore bc dan has NO character substance or personality. there are no attempts made to even flesh out his character and atp it's just. so. BORING. like 10 days and this is the best shit you can come up with....girl just throw the whole thing away