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I need a drama like with real people
I watched he first jasmine I loved it and i want something similair but with longer redemption arc for the ML I don't like mistreatment but i lovw how the ml was cold at beginning but he is warm person Also I love how the MC is so complex
As for the ml I would misunderstanding but with longer arc and no stupid misunderstanding that get dragged
When I was on tiktok people were talking about author pov and how amazing it was I never read recommended books from tiktok but the author was russian ( i have never read a russian web novel ) and many people commented it was amazing
I cant really get past chapter 5 the writing is cringe its in first person okay I usually don't really care if it's third or first person because I grow up reading in many languages for me its a detail but like does the writing get better or will he stop being cringe I don't know how to explain but the way he talks to himself is like 14 teen age male his mental age should be +30
This is really messy I usually comment under people who don't understand and explain it to them but this is too much
What I got is they r all in book and also the sister who became a boy and her friend knows that but what makes me angry why did they treat him like crazy person when they remembered this since elementary???
Also why did he and the girl write a story about him being mistreated r+pd and dying?????? As someone who writes sometimes this doesn't even come to my mind using my brother name to something like this
Yeah I also thought that that's some crazy work. You got to hate someone to do that shit
They deserve to be slapped by the brother (at least)