I hate bl that tries to downplay serious shit for the sake of maintaining "wholesome-ness" or wtv. Idgaf is hes "yakuza", pulling a gun out on someone for them to prove their love is grounds for no-contact. WTF?? They tried to play it off by acting like its just cuz hes a "brocon". He did some nasty shit like that and faced no consequences at all. If julio really loved mc he would have cussed his lil bro out for that stunt, left with the mc, and cut off all contact with the bro. He felt guilty before but now he has no reason too. Imagine seeing your brother try to kill your lover for no reason and your cries and pleas didn't stop him for pulling the trigger, that shits traumatic. And what stops the lil bro from killing him if he makes him mad or jealous another time?? But ofc they joked it all off at the end
It's ended?!?!? Aww I loved this story, I've been reading this for yearss now. It's rare for the main character and their love interest to be this goofy, especially during sex lol. It's so refreshing seeing them interact, sometimes cringey too, but that's one of the best parts about them. I hate seven's backstory so much but I'm happy he's living the life he wants now.
yeah I get it's fictional and all that, but these guys don't know the first thing about safe sex yet they're supposed to be seasoned sluts??...
U met a rando(coworker) online to fuck and they tell u they only do it raw and YOU AGREED TO DO THAT!?!? tf?? And Mr virgin boss, you dont know what your subordinate has, why would u want him to nut inside without a test... or so ig STDs don't exist in this world?? I'm sorry but that just ruined the smut for me ngl. and the dumbass lack of communication from both of them pmo
okayy now I remember why I hated this years ago. After rereading, I can guarantee this is still straight dogshit. the unnecessary rape was bad enough but the main characters pmo. It makes no sense why the seme is so obsessed with that freak. idc what anyone says he's irredeemable, who tf pushes someone down the stairs, almost crippling or killing them btw, and bullies them just cuz of a crush??? He has the audacity to act pitiful like he didn't cause all of his own problems, why is the author trying to make us feel bad for him??
And another reason why I don't think hes redeemable is cuz he says he feels bad but nothing about his attitude and personality ever changes in the story. Plus, the fact that he's really egotistical enough to think that he had a chance with seima even when he was obviously put off by him and told him to stay away. And he wants to apologize to seima instead of the guy he bullied??. And even when he finally make an excuse-filled apology, the author made everyone take the blame off of him. "Its kinda my fault too cuz I knew u had a crush on me ", "Its my fault too cuz I kinda stole your man" tf that mean? its not like the uke owns seima wtf? SOMEONE GET THE AUTHOR OUT OF THE KITCHEN, THEY'RE NOT COOKING.
And the moment you wanna feel bad for him when he was assaulted, he proceeds to rape the only person that really cared about him??? WTF?!
And idk about yall but he barely showed any real interest in the seme. He was just using him throughout the story, for practice and also when he finally realized he never had a chance with seima. He just went to the seme as a backup or rebound. Even when they were together he was still going on about seima after saying he was gonna stop and called seme his servant. Idk who the author is lying to, this ain't no love story. Ngl I feel bad for the seme, seems like the kind of relationship that will break apart in a couple years when seme gets a backbone for once or when the uke finds a new "prince".
Based on how the comments are reacting, I'm not reading ts.
From what I've read, the uke is an annoying bastard that hates his bf, cares more about a fictional character than his bf, completely lacks communication skills, doesn't make an effort to clear up misunderstandings, and absolutely doesn't deserve the seme?? I didn't even like him in the main story ngl.
Seems like the author doesn't know how to write good characters or romance stories lol.











The crazy prick is annoying asf. I hope he develops soon or dies idk lolol.
But Sayo is really starting to pmo now. Its hard watching a grown man in his 40s have no self respect and be so damn naive. They've already established that he can rely on his new vampire friend for blood or rely on his powers so he doesn't have to kill or hurt anyone to feed, but he still chooses to act like hes being evil for doing so and stays on that asshole's beck and call. The guy called him a masochist and he tried to act offended like it wasn't painfully obvious.
I really like the plot, so I'll continue reading for now, but I really hope Sayo locks tf in. He cant keep starving himself and waiting for drops off blood from that asshole. The obviously better option would be to hypnotize someone and get a few drinks in. Idk why he thinks starving himself and getting to the point were he can just randomly attack and kill someone is the better and more humane idea????? My brother in Christ, you're like 40...act like it...