yeah I get it's fictional and all that, but these guys don't know the first thing about safe sex yet they're supposed to be seasoned sluts??...
U met a rando(coworker) online to fuck and they tell u they only do it raw and YOU AGREED TO DO THAT!?!? tf?? And Mr virgin boss, you dont know what your subordinate has, why would u want him to nut inside without a test... or so ig STDs don't exist in this world?? I'm sorry but that just ruined the smut for me ngl. and the dumbass lack of communication from both of them pmo
Ngl I'm disappointed asfuck.
I was hoping kai would be the bottom here
It was too easy to guess he would be the top in this dynamic so I expected a "twist" but ofc not
okayy now I remember why I hated this years ago. After rereading, I can guarantee this is still straight dogshit. the unnecessary rape was bad enough but the main characters pmo. It makes no sense why the seme is so obsessed with that freak. idc what anyone says he's irredeemable, who tf pushes someone down the stairs, almost crippling or killing them btw, and bullies them just cuz of a crush??? He has the audacity to act pitiful like he didn't cause all of his own problems, why is the author trying to make us feel bad for him??
And another reason why I don't think hes redeemable is cuz he says he feels bad but nothing about his attitude and personality ever changes in the story. Plus, the fact that he's really egotistical enough to think that he had a chance with seima even when he was obviously put off by him and told him to stay away. And he wants to apologize to seima instead of the guy he bullied??. And even when he finally make an excuse-filled apology, the author made everyone take the blame off of him. "Its kinda my fault too cuz I knew u had a crush on me ", "Its my fault too cuz I kinda stole your man" tf that mean? its not like the uke owns seima wtf? SOMEONE GET THE AUTHOR OUT OF THE KITCHEN, THEY'RE NOT COOKING.
And the moment you wanna feel bad for him when he was assaulted, he proceeds to rape the only person that really cared about him??? WTF?!
And idk about yall but he barely showed any real interest in the seme. He was just using him throughout the story, for practice and also when he finally realized he never had a chance with seima. He just went to the seme as a backup or rebound. Even when they were together he was still going on about seima after saying he was gonna stop and called seme his servant. Idk who the author is lying to, this ain't no love story. Ngl I feel bad for the seme, seems like the kind of relationship that will break apart in a couple years when seme gets a backbone for once or when the uke finds a new "prince".
Based on how the comments are reacting, I'm not reading ts.
From what I've read, the uke is an annoying bastard that hates his bf, cares more about a fictional character than his bf, completely lacks communication skills, doesn't make an effort to clear up misunderstandings, and absolutely doesn't deserve the seme?? I didn't even like him in the main story ngl.
Seems like the author doesn't know how to write good characters or romance stories lol.
I remember giving this 3 stars in 2023, but rn this deserves 1. Ik the author was trying to go for a cute, dorky, insecure guy who's hopelessly inlove but they just wrote an annoying bumbling fool who u can't root for cuz he doesnt want to lock in and makes the wrong play every time. All he literally does throughout the story is run away. While reading all I'm thinking about is that one meme "if ur not gonna play, PASS THE BALL" lmao.
It's so annoying seeing him sabotage himself over and over for no reason at all. And what's even more annoying is seeing him fawn over the uke in his head, try to impress him, get PLASTIC SURGERY FOR HIM, quit his job and change his job for him, but then reject the uke over and over again when he clearly shows interest in him back. It's not even realistic, it's dumb and pathetic. It's like another comment said, hes making things WAAAAY more complicated than it needs to be. Even when he somehow got with the uke, he went about everything in the worst way possible. He NEVER communicates, he just blushes and runs away constantly. That isn't cute.
Idk why uke even likes the guy, if someone I was pursuing said he likes me but kept curving my advances that much and running away from me constantly, I would have left him alone long ago. Tho it's kinda nice seeing a uke chase after the seme for once in bl/yaoi, but damn, this was a painful and embarrassing read.
I gave this a one star before, and forgot why but now I remember. This was dogshit. I feel bad for the seme, he's surrounded by fucking idiots. The megumi guy can't communicate at his big age and treats someone who is close to him and YOUNGER than him like shit for years for no real reason, when he could have just said he had a skin condition or someshit. But why do I expect common sense from a dude that got hard for a middle schooler. And the older brother was annoying asFUCK, he purposely made the misunderstandings worse by making his own little brother think he's fucking around with megumi. And his relationship was a mess too irdgaf. He used the guy that likes him for sex, and only after they fucked did he tell him, he's not gonna date him. Only when he thought he would loose him was when he finally locked in and confessed. What a fucking asshole.. This was a mess wrapped in a pretty "sweet and fluffy" bow.. or maybe I'm just a hater lmao
"MY OWN CHILD" idk why but when Ryder said that line, it almost made me cry
Jinx if it was peak lol
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And I have a feeling that the main reason why ppl dislike this or are shocked is not cuz of the sa but the fact that this bl didn't follow the stereotype by not having the small, pretty one be the bottom, half of yall would be fine with this and excuse the sa if that were the case. As seen in so many other bl stories. Hell, some of yall have other SA stories in yalls reading list with a 5 star rating right now, yet yall have a problem with this? Yeah cuz yall dont hate the SA, yall just prefer the cute, petite bottom on the receiving side of it.
the bottom pmo so bad, his facial expression irritated the hell outta me, and fym he doesnt know he was being a stalker??! so he's just going around thinking that's how to bag a man??
read this years ago, I saw that I gave this 1 star but I couldn't remember why I hated it that much..Now I do.. Uke is fucking irritating and he doesn't deserve the seme. The guy is a supervisor but never really reprimanded or FIRE that other dude that sexually assaults him every day???I hate how they keep playing it off like it's fucking normal. And don't get me started on the fact that he ditches his boyfriend's birthday for the same sexual harassing subordinate????!!??!?!! That's relationship-ending shit right there. The pos was confronted but he didnt even run after his bf to even ask for forgiveness, and instead the seme had to apologize later on like he didn't have every right to be mad wtf. He clearly doesn't like the seme that much if he never apologized and only went after the seme when he really felt like he was gonna get dumped. I hate how they wrapped the story up as a happily ever after when their relationship is anything but romantic or cute. This was just a headache, the seme should have broken up with him and found someone better.
Tf ts was such a boring nothing burger ass story. Just fucking, and fucking, more fucking, then assault, and at the very end they happen to "fall in love". The mcs only personality trait is being a happy go lucky slut and nothing else, and I'm confused on why people think kei is better than ml, the guy that's barely in 3 panels in the story and assaulted the mc to "help him"?? hes better?? And ml was okay at first, then he assaulted the guy, the author ruined their already boring and non-existent relationship with that shit. they tried to make it seem more romantic with the typical "I've loved u secretly for years" bs but it still doesn't change much. yall are tweaking, this was
why did I give this a 3 stars years ago, it's 1 at best. Io was just boring, even he knew he was about as interesting as a dead fish. And both him and the other bottom looked like lil kids. yuck
ts is dogshit at best. nothing burger ass plot, chemistry, romance and characters. and yall are saying "it would've been better if they switched", it really would not changed a damn thing tho
I read this in 2023 and I gave it 2 stars, I wanted to reread this again cuz I dont remember why I hated it and it looked cute.
But know I remember why.....ts is annoying asf. Or maybe I'm just a hater lol
One thing I hate the most is a "I've loved you for x amount of years, but I'll never confess cuz I'm scared but I'll still get mad and frustrated that nothing about our relationship has changed" troupe. It's so annoying to read someone complain about a situation they can easily get out of by either confessing or accepting a rejection and moving on. Like how are u mad they're dating other people but u don't want to confess and take a chance so that they can date u instead. Mc had so many chances to confess but he purposely didn't and instead got mad at ml. But the ml is a dumbass too with no fucking personality and nothing about his behavior showed he liked the mc or even gaf about him. And instead of finding it cute that they both thought their feelings were unrequited, I got even more annoyed, like are u kidding me?? Both of yall could have dated years ago but u both just didnt have the balls to confess?. ugh I hate them both lmao
Read this in 2023: Thought ts was ass, 2 stars at best, cuz of the omega top x alpha bottom dynamic.
2026, Looking through my read list, saw this story again: huh why did I hate this again? let me see......
After rereading: Oh now I remember.....It's trash.
I still like a good omega top x alpha bottom story, but this is genuinely some bullshit. The alpha was an asshole sure, but this whole story was just about him being being raped, victim blamed, gaslight by everyone close to him, and manipulated into giving in to his abuser cuz he thought he'd be like his father who abandoned his omegan mother if he didn't, even tho his situation is completely different from his actually abusive father cuz he's the victim here. Not only are they trying to gaslight the alpha, but they're also trying to gaslight us into thinking that the rapist omega is the guy that's hurting the most here and he's just mistreated and he deserves to be chased after and deserves love too blah blah blah. And the second "couple" is just the exact same. It's a shitty story where the villain wins with no satisfying end, a toxic relationship being told like its some cute love story. I'm glad other ppl are hating too lmaoooo
The only other tiny thing I liked about this was the casual non-sexual nudity of the alpha's female friend in that one chap, I hate the girl and the other 'friend' tho. But idk it just felt rare to see in bl.
jiar crumbling from being rejected is so real.
Also, wtf was that at the end??? pls no angst rn, I can't take anymore＿|￣|○
I don't get what some of these comments are on about, I really love how wholesome this story is, it's cliche ash but still good and a bit different. There's drama but not too much and misunderstandings get worked out quickly. And the best thing is there's no real love triangle in this story, Seno isn't the 2ml cuz there isn't one. With no extra drama and without dragging things out, when mc realizes her feelings, she immediately chooses Iori and clearly expresses that decision to Seno. I find that so refreshing cuz a lot of shoujo love stupid long love triangles.
Also, I hate when ppl are so used to toxicity and mediocre smut in their stories that when they find something that differs from that, they can't appreciate it and call it "boring".
And is anyone else getting Luka vibes from Iori and Adrien vibes from Seno???(mlb characters). just me? okay lol