that's it? really? THIS IS ASS. omg I'm sorry but this is truly ass. yeah sure now they're all happy and life is all rainbows and unicorns now but this is genuinely....not a very nice way to end things. like tf? honestly, the whole story has huge flaws. like huge flaws. I'm not even speaking as just a reader but as a writer too. i would've loved if the story was handled in a different way. like unfortunately it's just your typical yaoi
honestly I'll be real here. as a reader, this is an okayish story. it's one that you can read to waste your time. it's not a storythat will change your life in general. for some it might be as stories are all about preferences. but as a writer? this is absolutely buns. the story overall is nice. there is potentialto it. it's very cliche tbh but sometimes cliche can be turned into something new but this???? this is the cliche of all cliches. it's simply not done well. it's just there. like the story is just there. as if there wasn't any effort done in writing it. it's quite a predictable story that's why it's not good. and the characters are just characters. they exist for the story but you cannot seperate them from the story like you can do with actually well written characters. even if you might think that some of them get development like the seme but even those are half assed....if you can call that an actual development....... honestly I'm all for second chance stories BUT WHEN THEY'RE WELL WRITTEN. when there's actually a GOOD redemption. it's very unfortunate to see a lot of stories like this one overall tbh. half assed slop i do like the story but i still think that there should've been more effort in writing it and planning it out.
idk why i keep reading this stupid slop. it's not even a good slop. it's just horrible. harassment, sa, and now rape. what else bro
Lol. The first sane comment I have read here. I am reading it out of curiosity and you are damn right. Rosa is a rapist and disgusting sociopath.
You can't be serious. He is allowing her to do it to him. He is into the shit she's doing to him and wants more. Did you read the last few chapters with eyes closed?
him allowing her to do it does not mean he likes it???? ever heard of fucking consent? she's STILL forcing herself on him. this is like saying that if a person is getting raped and they obviously don't like but do not fight back, then they like it and that doesn't make it rape. be ffr okay.
others are just saying that he's allowing it but he's clearly showing that he dislikes it. he's feeling tormented by her not just recently but since they were younger cuz she always bullied him and harassed him.
boohoo get out
Please either learn how to read or just open your eyes while trying to do so.. then you will def see him being turned on by all this and actually enjoying it?! But if you don't like it no one forces you to read. Idk why people coming here complaining about something they could just ignore and go on with their day lol
Right? He did it with her first being drugged, then he wanted the ring back. And he got contact with her mom to find her - his childhood "friend" he was curious/ wanted to play this bullying as cat and mouse.
fuck seeing him cry turned me on omg. like i lowkey teared up tbh but this really was hot. MAKE HIM CRY MORE
I DID NOT EXPECT THIS I MEAN I EXPECTED THE WORSE TO HAPPEN BUT PLEASE THIS IS TOO MUCH
i have to say i was reading through the whole chapter terrified to my bones knowing something WILL happen AND I WAS FUCKING RIGHT OH GOD WHY
I could feel it tooo.
it's so scary....
i can't believed it finally ended....I've been reading for a long time religiously evwry week it releases and i really have grown way too attached to the story and characters. it hurts that i won't be seeing more of je-oh and seong-rok. they were, hands down, the best ever couple in any yaoi I've read. and now I'm going to miss them so much. it was just perfect. the way that thia is ao well written is just amazing. the author did such a great job. good story and good execution cuz even if tou have a good story, what makes you a good author is how well you execute that story. i really gope there'll be a side story. i wish i could see more of je-oh and seong-rok living happily as they deserve to. idk even like to see thw aide couple (i forgot both thwir names). like I'd eat up anythings i swear if it means reading more of it.