Not sure about the writing in the last chapters, to be honest... Too bad bcause I liked the story a lot. Maybe it's the few jokes thrown here and there that are just not doing it for me. This and the chibis in the middle of a serious conversation. I feel like this is not the initial tone of the story and it's clashing. I really hope the writing choices will get better in the next chapters. This story has so much potential and the characters are super interesting
Not sure about the writing in the last chapters, to be honest... Too bad bcause I liked the story a lot. Maybe it's the few jokes thrown here and there that are just not doing it for me. This and the chibis in the middle of a serious conversation. I feel like this is not the initial tone of the story and it's clashing. I really hope the writing choices will get better in the next chapters. This story has so much potential and the characters are super interesting
It has delulu written all over it. I love it