what a rough start... the art style changes so much but it's pretty. even though i like the previous one better because seongrok isn't recognizable here much. i think the warm tone is too much when the previous seasons were more of a cool tone and it fitted the theme a lot. nonetheless, it's pretty and i am bracing myself for whats to come cause it gets nasty ahead
jaehyuk raising his own standard T___T notice how he went out of his way and bought garam's favorite drink and how he was facing his whole body to listen to garam, holding his arm and all T____T man surely came a long way but there's still a long way to go! cheering for you baby i cant believe you used to be a manchild T___T(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
i am going to just say it. Mingwa is so bad at story telling. The art is top notch, no doubt, but there hasnt been any improvement in the writing part since BJ alex. This chapter felt super underwhelming. A TIE? fr? either lose or win in a situation like this because a tie just doesnt cut it.
and this could have been done 20 chapters ago, i feel like this story is draggin out for too long without any light to be seen. im not even gonna talk about jaekyung because it's just wasting my time
Just because you are impatient and not happy with the story, doesn't mean that Mingwa is a bad writer. I actually think that she is doing a really good job with the story. She is very clever with the details and also the hints about Jaekyung throughout the story. So, even though we barely know anything about him, we know plenty about him at the same time, just because of his facial expressions and the way he talks and his reactions to certain situations etc...
It's really interesting actually.
But yeah, I can agree that the chapters are a little too short. I feel like she could fit a little bit more stuff into each chapter. But I don't know how all that works. Maybe she doesn't have enough time for that or something.
It's not just me. I bet you plenty of people agree with me on this- that she is such a typical writer. This is such a typical storytelling. I am not impatient. I have read stories of 200 chapters and i wasnt ever bored. This though, is full of unnecessary fillers. And im not reading her work just now, ive been there since bj alex- i know how it goes. It's exactly going like bj alex with just better art and dragged out story
Jaekyung's "expressions" alone doesnt do anything to the story and as i said, it's dragged till 50 chapters totally unnecessary. This could have been done 20 or 10 chapters ago
Okay. But all these elements are important to the story. The story would suck if it was rushed and if everything was fixed right away.
And I think the story only feels dragged because it's been cut into short chapters with a long time to wait between each chapter. Because of that, there are many chapters about the same thing during a long period of time. So, it isn't really any problem with the story itself. It's the length of every chapter and when they are published that is the problem. If the chapters were longer, and/or were published in a quicker pace, then we wouldn't have that problem. But it is what it is.
But yeah, you have your opinion and I have mine, and that's okay.
Novel readers tell me if ilay ever grovels for taeui- like ever? For once?
Illy will beg too forget about grovel
OMG PLS TELL ME THIS IS NOT A JOKE! I'LL DIE FOR HIM TO BEG
Ohh can I ask for the context? Would love to be spoiled on what finally humbles him into begging
Tae was somehow leaves his grasp not intentional for the 3rd time and loses it and after he finds him at slept together and at morning illy tells tae please im begging you don't do it again to me and they left to Germany together as lovers