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If this was omegavers Naoto (MC) would be popping babies left and right because oh my ghad they're so freaky for each other uuuggghh.

I giggle like a little sh*t everytime whenever they naturally do a roleplay when they get so horny or about to have sex. Like omfg, I can't even get horny with them because I cackle whenever I read their dialogues during sexy time. You can always see what keeps them going in bed and I like that they naturally do it by just observing each other.

Mf when they started to narrate the older brother's last report of the green haired police officer (forgot their names sorry) I started bawling bro. Especially seeing those bastards who have a hand on everyone's tragic life be arrested, I cried like a b*tch.

I'm so happy and proud of them. The MC and ML got their freedom. While the police officer got his closure with his brother AAAAHH.

Now I want that b*tch to pay ten fold while inside the prison omaghad.

MF should've listened to the other comments to not read this shiz. It's grape with a side of half-assed plot. There's nuthin at all.

Seriously, this is a waste of read. If any of you came to the comment section first to check if this is worth the read. I'm telling you now, turn around and never look back because this shit is ass as all hell.

First, this is the kind of story you would find in the early wattpad days. A story written by a freaking cringe edgy teen (Also referring to myself cuz I know for a fact that I would've eaten this shit up and call it a peak story when I was at that age).

The MC's mentality (Personality? Attitude? Dunno something about him) in the first few chapters is soooo frustrating and slightly cringe. He has this "woe-is-me" mentality, and it makes my eye roll every single time. Although I get that he may have trauma or low self-esteem because of what those sons of b*tches (Referring to his father and his so-called family) did to him, but his inner monologue all through out of the early chapters is just him whining and whining. It just made it so hard to connect to him and his story emotionally. And when his flashback is finally shown, I was just like "Yeah, uhuh... I already knew that... Next...".

You would think he would grow a back bone from his experiences, but no. He just let's them, tho I understand if he can't stand up to his "family", he could atleast, to some extent, be able to stand up against ML in the early chapters right? No. The author made the MC the typical Y/N Male Omega. Weak to pleasure, easily manipulated (the becomes surprised when they were treated like trash), and not that sharpest nor the brightest.

AND BIIIIIIIIIITTCCCHHH. Don't get me started on his appearance. In the early chapters, he looks to be a decent working adult. Petite but looks normal human. TELL ME WHY as the chapters progressed he became smaller and smaller and became looking like the Y/N meme (iykyk). The ML became more good looking tho his build is one of those typical CEO wide shoulders that can cover the mc's whole body in the Y/N memes. Liikkkeeee whhaat.

I have more to say but Imma stop right here for now. I've read this all night and I need my well deserved sleep. I'M ALSO PISSED OFF AT THE ML, but thats for another time. Need me some sleep.

I really don't know where to start, like whaaatt??? MC seeing random words all of the sudden doesn't really make sense. I mean, what does that got to do with the story?? It would have been fine if the author didn't add that since that story would flow properly either way. Ngl him seeing this random ass words that doesn't give him much details is useless. So I'll just interpret it as him opening his freaking third eye after his near death experience in that chapter where he was forcebly drugged by those assholes. Instead of seeing ghost, he sees words... Yeah...

Chapter 52: Why dafuq did she put his hair up like that???? It's so unflattering on him. And what are those clothes??? He looks so much better when she dressed him up when they were shopping in the early chapters. What happened to her fashion sense??? Omfg.

Just hope there's a baby when this end and that the author would somewhat cook some explanation on why he literally see words, otherwise this is a really a waste of read.

Jesus Christ... All of them are broken people oh my lord. I've been tearing up whenever their past are being tackled, I can't

Damn that's really it?? Will there be side story?? Like, where's my kiss?? The wedding?? Hello?? Dzammnn...

WAITTT WHAT IF MARQUIS GREY ALREADY KNOW THAT HIS HEALTH IS DETERIORATING AND THE REASON WHY HE IS FINDING A "WIFE" IS SO HE COULD FIND A GOOD MATCH TO HIS SUCCESSOR????? I might be wrong tho but wouldn't it be a fun theory?? Besides, he accepted our FL and her terms so fast like?? And the room that he arranged for her is for the wife of the Marquis, and didn't he brought them there so he could make sure that she is still "pure", but he already instructed to put her besides the head of the house and not even in a guest room. For someone whose wanting to make sure that "his future" wife is up to his standards, he sure do treat them nicely. Anyway, my imagination is wilding right now HAHAHAHA R.I.P to the old man btwヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

Crying so hard OMG It's so beautiful, I'm glad no one died. I was praying in my mind all throughout the time I was reading HAHAHA