Am I tripping or the art is lowk giving AI
Also a k-author who knows and uses enneagram instead of mbti??? Instant respect
Are y'all overreacting or am I the one who's underreacting bc this wasn't sad at all. Maybe it's due to the reason that I already knew this is a tragedy, but seriously, how am I supposed to feel attached to characters who knew/interacted with each other for practically only two days before getting their ass handed?? Moreover they just fucked everytime. Everything was extremely fast paced and the characters were shallowly written. but hey no shit sherlock, it only has 8 chps
Honestly, it would've been better if it was extended to 20 chps max. The tragedy would've been well executed, but it's obvious the author chose porn over plot. It's probably their first work, so imo they have a lot of potential
All these years of reading the most extreme 2nd hand embarrassment stories has made me so immune that ts doesn't faze me anymore
Ok Taeyul THREW his brother OUT of the WINDOW and he ended up breaking his whole body?? That homophobic brother must've done something really horrible that Taeyul had to resort to such an extreme action??
Had a lot of potential but it ditched said potential just to become another action trashslop.
The only good thing about this manhwa is Aster, the mc. I love chaotic neutrals, especially ones that use their brain and Aster is the standard definition of one. I don't usually enjoy OP characters but he makes it fun. Still, his personality can't carry all the burden of engagement when EVERYTHING ELSE SUCKS ASS. There's only sm genius I can take before it becomes increasingly exhausting and repetitive to read. The plot is all over the place for fucks sake, the characters are ALSO all over the place. The pacing is horrible, the OFFICIAL translations are equally just as bad and disappointing.
What the fuck is going on in this manhwa, I genuinely can't comprehend anymore. My main gripe is with the official trans, the publishing company should fire everyone on the team bc not only are there discrepancies in the grammar, the TYPESETTING is bad, some words aren't even translated (like the names of the power moves). Suffering from a major headache rn bc what the fuck is this poor excuse of a job. Moving on, you can clearly see this manhwa was made purely on the basis of hype and flashy moves, this explains the incoherent plot, most characters are introduced only to be ditched immediately what?? Remember that Paule guy from the entrance ceremony?? Yeah, he seemed like he'd contribute and be part of the mc's cohort but there's no mention of him AT ALL after that??? Literally, none, absolutely none of the characters are developed properly, imo even Aster, I still can't make heads or tails of his past life and the events that transpire, maybe I would if the OFFICIAL translations weren't so SHITTY.
Then there's the issue of fanservice. Now, I personally don't have much of a problem with the art, it suits the story...except for maybe the fact that every single female character has HUGE BADONKADONGS. But hey, at least they aren't too sexualized aside from that...yeah right. It's still hella weird idgaf.
Dropping this at chp 35, it's been fun Aster...I wanted to see you interact more with powerful and OP characters like Henge and your sworn enemy, the head of Deculan. The dynamics and tension would've been fucking bomb. Future readers, my friendly word of advice is to ignore the OFF-ASS-CIAL translations, you'll be spared the aneurysm. Good day and good fucking bye.
Y'all gotta stop, I've been trying to marinate this so bad but these r*phael gay allegations has me on a chokehold
I'm so invested in this, it's not even a joke. Yaoigem among the endless yaoislop of today
I just hope the mc is as smart as how she'd said to be. The one person she can trust rn is only herself. I might be overreaching here but as of now, I'm kinda irked at how she's wary of other girls but not some BOY, ESPECIALLY given that he appeared outta nowhere and interacted with her ONLY AFTER she came into contact with the phone, it can't be a coincidence. He's extremely suspicious from ALL angles
This is definitely the type of plot where you sit back, turn your brain off and enjoy. Atp, I'll take anything other than rapeslop, this is gold compared to other mainstream bl on the market
I'm usually not into dilfs but I'd totally crack duke chesika
