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Are y'all overreacting or am I the one who's underreacting bc this wasn't sad at all. Maybe it's due to the reason that I already knew this is a tragedy, but seriously, how am I supposed to feel attached to characters who knew/interacted with each other for practically only two days before getting their ass handed?? Moreover they just fucked everytime. Everything was extremely fast paced and the characters were shallowly written. but hey no shit sherlock, it only has 8 chps
Honestly, it would've been better if it was extended to 20 chps max. The tragedy would've been well executed, but it's obvious the author chose porn over plot. It's probably their first work, so imo they have a lot of potential