Yk. To just say it out loud.
is that really all you have to say after reading the story? Bruh
Kiyoto is an amazingly well written character and I'm so glad he wasn't done dirty. In plots like these I always root for the 2nd male lead.
I hope kiyoto has a sequel for his story in the future
1. The abc names being like a triangle (love triangle)
2. The title "a senpai" having double meaning of 1 senpai and a senpai named "A"
3. The hiding and reveal of B-senpai's face to signify how he caught feelings.
Nakamura sensei is a fucking genius
Just 2 minutes ago I was studying the acceleration of a spring constant of 50 N/m. Now I'm studying the acceleration of their cum going pew pew at lewd miles per hour.
It's so rare to see a rejected confession moment that turns the rejector slowly falling in love with the person who confessed. I'm tired of the cliche "everything works out in love!" troupe!. yall are liars!!!!!
I was worried i was starting to emphasize with the guys for a while. That ending snapped me back to reality.
Now for chp 5, i think it was a bit reasonable. We are able to see it for what it is, disgusting and vile.
Of course it's gross. But it's good that it's portrayed gross, yk? The kid never liked it. He wasn't enjoying it like those shota mangas. He hates it.
The reality of his crime is a stark contrast to how the seme emotionally manipulates us, readers, into dumbing down his actions as a "trauma response". Bro never needed to that. It was all him.
So the author is intentionally showing to us how bad it is and how he needs to fucking die and go to jail. The author doesn't want u pity him. It's just a different perspective, even if it's the wrong one.
Well that's my take.