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I like it, but I question the point of the death and second chance plot point. Seems utterly unnecessary to the story. That death isn't used to change things, because things change on their own without MC intervention. There's apparently no reason for these changes either; ML doesn't remember that other life like MC. It's also unsatisfying that MC never tells ML what happened, nor does ML ever remember on his own. Just all seems kind of pointless.
This story is actually completed; so it's a shame the translation stops about halfway.