beta
It's a pretty okay story, easy to follow. I got mixed feelings on the villian since he's scum, but also arguably a desperate victim trying to survive in a twisted society. My head canon is he eventually gets in a happy relationship with the Emperor, because I want him to be happy even if he's kind of a bastard.
Depending on how you look at this story, it's either a three or four out of five. I'll give it 4 since it gave me some good feelings, but I'd understand a three star rating. It's not one of those memorable stories, it's more like mildly pleasant fast food.
Wow, that was satisfying. A shame I had to wait to the end for the main couple to have consensual sex, though admittedly I think they fucked a grand total of two times in the whole story, lol. Anyways, I loved it.