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It's a pretty okay story, easy to follow. I got mixed feelings on the villian since he's scum, but also arguably a desperate victim trying to survive in a twisted society. My head canon is he eventually gets in a happy relationship with the Emperor, because I want him to be happy even if he's kind of a bastard.
Depending on how you look at this story, it's either a three or four out of five. I'll give it 4 since it gave me some good feelings, but I'd understand a three star rating. It's not one of those memorable stories, it's more like mildly pleasant fast food.

chere100 created a topic of Blind Play

I removed a star for killing that sweet heart. RIP.

chere100 created a topic of Ink Painting

Okay, besides the ending being rushed, it just felt incomplete and unsatisfying. What's really funny is you could make it more complete, and still have basically the exact same ending. Here's what you do.
At the point where Damien comes to save Ian and finds his sister possibly dead, you DONT have him strangle Ian and take the fall. That was stupid. It was self defense. What you do is have the sister get caught for trying to murder Ian. She still gets hit like before and whether she lives or dies doesn't matter, but I'd have her live (so she can go to prison, and/or spend life in a mental hospital). Have the police search her place, and find a diary where she brags about the things she has done. It should mention the cat and the butler (the butler deserves justice!). Naturally it should include her plans for harming Ian. You could even add them finger print checking the pictures she left in Damien's place. They won't have Damien's finger prints, but they will have hers! She gets caught; Damien's reputation is restored (and maybe he can stop taking that medicine, unsure, and not important). Now Ian has been in and out of conciousness, but he was able to say the sister did it. Then he's unconscious for a while, wakes up, Damien is gone, ending proceeds as before. Add some extras explaining what happened, and why Damian disappered for years. We know part of it is him being silly, but the evil sister's diary would likely reveal he was romantically involved with Ian, which I doubt his family will like. But they'll also be feeling remorseful/guilty because of how they treated Damien in the past, which will make Ian and Damien's romance go smoother in the long run.
THIS is how the story should have went and ended. And I'm just going to brainwash myself into thinking that's how it went. From now on, my version is canon! (︶︿︶)=凸

chere100 created a topic of Minmotion Syndrome

I fucking knew those two were half brothers, they looked too similar.

chere100 created a topic of My Suha

I had no desire to see a tragedy, fuck! Why's that side story gotta end there?! I demand more of those two idiots! Ah, my heart hurts, it hurts! T^T

chere100 created a topic of Wolves behind bars

Wasn't expecting this story to be bad, but it was definitely a bit beyond my expectations. Nice little mystery play, though I figured things out before they officially revealed them. Was also pleased when I was right about glasses. Dude gave me the creeps.

chere100 created a topic of My Master

Easy enough story to follow, but they never did say what happens with the throne.

chere100 created a topic of The Tosa's Master

I think this either needs the psychological or tragedy genre marker. More the former.

How does this not have tragedy amongst its genres. It's nothing but tears.

chere100 created a topic of Your wish is my command

I thought the ending was fine. I just wish it properly confirmed them getting together.