I like the story and I like the graphics, the uke is very cute and in term of writing a blackmail is the way for a uke in a bl to accept sex without telling he wants sex. (Thus remaining « pure »). It’s just a narrative trick that many of you do not understand.
Anyway my biggest concern is … the toilet kink that many Japanese authors have.
There is just no way for me, living in Europe, that a dirty public toilet will arouse me, nooooo way. Maybe the Japanese toilet kink exist because their toilets are cleaner than a public toilet in Europe, but going in the middle of work to the toilets to masturbate is just so… meeeh.
A oneshot is too short. Ok so the story should goes like this according to me : seme realised that when he saw teacher fu… his girl he was in fact being excited by the teacher expression. Then a whole chapter about teacher and student having sex and teacher slowly realising that he likes doing it with his student. Then another whole chapter about miscommunication between them and their feeling. There the comments should change from « rape is so bad look at me I’m the purest here » to « communication is very important in a couple relationship, I’m so smart for stating the obvious » Then a love rival from the teacher side, that triggers seme to realise his own feelings, there the comments will change again to « I don’t like this bit* rival, (good job author) and it lasts one or two chapters, then they finally get on same love level and have sex in a hotel. Then extra, we see them three years laters, they are still a couple and very happy with lot of consensual sex. End. Yes I’ve read too many yaois ha ha ha
Story: why not, let’s see where it leads to. (Like we all already don’t know…)
Technically: The uke is draw like a girl. I get it that the artist wants the reader to feel the fragility of the MC but this is really exaggerated. There’s nothing manly in him, it’s just a girl with a d. Draw a girl instead. The seme is gorgeous but his hand are like two meters each. Seme himself is like 3 meters. lol. And personal taste but that bulge in the stomach because of seme big d is soooo absolutely impossible. How can the seme even walk with an anaconda like this, does he walks it like a dog every morning?
I know it’s fantasy but this is sooo exagerated that instead of feeling empathy for the MC I just keep on laughing on those impossible proportions.
Anyway, still the artist made a good job, helped by the story, so no more complaints!
Lol. Walk like a dog.
I also never judge any manga, be it toxic or whatever I don't explain on any story. But like you said their body proportions is tooooo much l, way too much. The mc is sucking a dick which is almost the half size of his head! How can you put that thing in your mouth. Your lips can become a Titan lips before sucking the whole thing.
Ha ha ha right! :)
The official translation is so much better than the non official of the same chapter, I could finish the chapter.
I still think that the manga artist never saw a real tululu because it looks like a leg ha ha ha, but if it’s her thing why not :).
Dirty talk in a novel is very erotic, because as a reader, you can imagine what you want around it, but in a comic you really have to find the fragile tension point :not too much, but not too few. Here it looks like the artist had a text and she just draw the text without adapting it for a visual moment, thus it makes it awkward and a turn of. Although I know it is also very hard to draw silence.
I’ll wait for the next official chapters to read how the story develops so far!
I am probably very rude by saying this, but the translation is weird. I’m sorry , the translator is probably doing her best (thank you by the way) and yet I have trouble with the dialogues. Also, I think the translator loves very much the manwha because she puts a personal comment on every dialogues, which I find cute but still a little bit too much. There was a translator who put all of her (funny and cute) comments at the end of a translated chapter, with notes and meme, that was very cute and not intrusive. Thank you anyway for the new chapters!
I felt the same
:))
The seme is talking so much while doing it… I get it, it’s dirty talk, but either the translation is strange or he’s babbling weird stuff during sex.
The art is still as good as always, I like it! The seme is non redemptional, no sorry, no « please I will change for your love » and I also think that non apologetic people who stand on their ground might be interesting. I didn’t read the entire novel so let’s wait and see where the story leads.
I like the story, I looove the art, the author knows really well human anatomy, the skin colours, really well done! (The background not so much, why?) although like in most yaoi the dicks are way too huge and not proportional with the body (come on they have a third leg instead of a dick, sometimes it is just way too much) « oh my god it’s sooo big! How will it fit! ». I hope there will be a character development though, but I don’t really see how the mc falls in love with his love interest, it seems to me a little bit too easy, but also on the same time if the love interest suddenly realises that he loves the MC out of nowhere I would feel it would be a little bit strange. Let’s hope that the story keep getting interesting.
Im glad to read it for free because i would not pay for AI assisted manga. A lot of panel are so obvious AI assisted, like the pannel in ch1 where yakuza holds a plate. Or when he jerks off MC and there is no arm. A lot of panel with strange hands, some weird faces not weird because of human mistakes.
The hair and their blocking too. Man I was hoping I was wrong from the ch 1’s first panel but the hints got worse in ch 2. I especially adore this mangaka’s art style. I wonder what circumstances led them to use AI
Me too! How sad!! From what I know mangakas are more pressured to release faster manga, because of coreans webtoons and AI. Also they are getting less and less paid (it was not very well paid before but now…). Also big publisher want to replace artists with ai so big platforms are slowly and quietly switching to AI manga/webcomics. The future will not be big publisher or big platform if you want to read human made stories. Art will not come to you like today, you will have to come to art. Gosh internet is becoming more ai everyday. Greedy ceo roting everything for a few more dollars.
It doesn’t help that ai-generated mangas are winning awards in Japan of all countries. If that isn’t the biggest middle finger to one of their largest cultural exports
Yes, i think it’s young shonen jump that awarded an AI manga a few month ago, there is this ai generated manga on webnovel being first in sale. AI is becoming harder to spot even for artists, and some people just dont care what they are reading, dumb technology by dumb people for dumb people. Japan got his soft power from talented artists who put their soul in their work, making it resonate with people and making Japan shine internationally. Japan is making a horrible fatal mistake by being very AI oriented, but their government and companies are mostly ruled by greedy old people who don’t understand art and who only see three month in advance. Thats why their politics is old people oriented. Shitty times
Just curious, can you point out exactly which pages that have the errors?
Sure!
Ch1: Page 11 top right: shoes
Page 12 top right « no i got 2 more jobs after that » eyes, bottom right, same problem
Page 14 top right, the entire character holding the plate is ai generated look at the plate and the way he holds it. We dont draw it that way. Also ai hands.
Page 21 « don’t touch me like that » look at the hand
Page 22 top right, eyes were redrawn
Page 24, the character has a floating hand, no arm
Page 30 the details on the car (not really sure for this one though)
I dont want to doubt but did you take the year this was first made into consideration like if you are thinking the mangaka used ai assist?
It was first released in 2019 and a private scan team been had this completely translated by 2021 so it is a completed story and i dont recall ai being that advanced before 2022.
the arm you mentioned as “missing” honestly isn’t there when i reread it. i checked again carefully and couldn’t find what you’re talking about, so if possible, can you point out the exact panel? same goes for the “strange faces and hands” you mentioned because tbh this mangaka art style has always looked like this for me. (maybe im wrong idk?
i mean just look at their earlier works
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/bakana_inuhodo_itooshii/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/strelitzio/uu/to_chapter-1/pg-1/
Its on page 24 bottom right
Yeah i think the person just jumped the gun and wrongly assumed with confidence becuz i just looked at the specific plate example they mentioned and have seen artists give characters less details when theyre in the background and he wasnt holding the plate out of the ordinary.
There are no floating arms and weird faces. The specific panel where the "arm disappeared" looks fine becuz that's appropriate for the angle we are viewing it from.
And ai couldnt generate like this in 2019 if it was around that time which i dont remember it being
No it was not that advanced before 2022, but there is definitly AI, without doubt. But its kind of altering the original art. Like the pages have been redrawn.
Yeah I gotta agree with u there in 2019 ai text to image generation wasn’t a thing available to the public until the late 2020s
And the ai then was extremely site specific
Look it up if u don’t believe me
Also complicated to use
This statement is so funny…
How much stupidity can a person spew?
so sorry to say this, but is this the first manga you’ve read? all of this can be explained without the use of ai. details on the shoes don’t always look good because they’re usually very small and hard to draw. it’s also completely viable that artists spend less time on them in favor of drawing more important things, which means they can come out looking a bit wonky. same thing goes for other small details like the eyes and hand you’ve mentioned. in this case it seems upscaling messed up the tiny details even more, hence the weird looking eyes and hand. missing limbs can happen and be attributed to human mistakes. the way the guy held the plate looks close to normal to me, but even this… “WE don’t draw it that way”… do all artists draw things the same way? no. i think you’re just paranoid my dude
i reached out to the translator on batoto. they said they enhance the scans using waifu. they’re not sure if that site uses ai or not, but they just used it to improve the quality. i’ve been a fan of this mangaka since reverse, so i was surprised someone accused them of ai. the translator said they have the raws from renta and just enhanced them to make it easier to read. they didn’t use photoshop at all, so it’s hard to get a high quality scans. they also didn’t want to post this that low qua!
i reached out to the translator. they said they enhance the scans using waifu. they’re not sure if that site uses ai or not, but they just used it to improve the quality. i’ve been a fan of this mangaka since reverse, so i was surprised someone accused them of ai. the translator said they have the raws from renta and just enhanced them to make it easier to read. they didn’t use photoshop at all, so it’s hard to get a high quality scans. they also didn’t want to post this that low qua!
This makes the most sense. Thank you for clarifying with them.
if we're being technical, any kind of image enhancement (be it upscaling or whatever) always uses AI cause it adds pixels based on what is already there. i just hope nobody went to the artist's socials to give them shit for "using AI" based on this whole misunderstanding
exactly lmao i find this whole thread kinda stupid imo
Uhm no =.= maybe you are too young to remember but image enhancement has been a thing wayyyyy before the AI Fart
I very much agree with your take. All these dumbasses just belittle someone's work and call it AI just because there's been a recent case. I've seen pretty much worse and it was hand drawn. There are always things like this because it's human drawn not AI made. Ai is very obvious to spot and I can very confidently tell you this is an original you knobs
ofc image enhancement has been a thing but it’s not 2010 anymore. we’re talking about images that have been enhanced, like, 3 days ago by a modern tool, not with topaz denoise
The art isn't done by Ai, the translator used an ai upscaler to resize the page because the scans they had were small and blurry.