Two wrongs don't make a right firstly. Secondly there should've been a content warning on the FIRST chapter and any chapters later that contained such triggering information.
How absolutely disgusting of a work. Traumatizing two fictional individuals for your sick romance story, the title alone in relation to the content is a red flag. How dare they call her broken, I sincerely hope the ones who created this go to hell or atleast feel the guilt from their actions. How absolutely disgusting.
I'm not an emotional person, however sometimes I'll accidentally mirror emotions visually not emotionally when I feel invested in a character enough. Him finding his mother, her being better and well and yet she didn't go to find him, and him forgiving that, him wishing she would be so happy that she never goes looking for him as the only thing she'll find out is that he died. Made my eyes water uncontrollably because his did.
I'm not as kind as him, I hope she goes looking, I hope she realises that her son is gone, that she regrets leaving him behind. She should've taken him with her, I hope him visiting makes her remember her son, I hope she goes to find him only to be struck by the heartbreaking knowledge that he died, that he grew up to be such a good man that he died protecting a little boy. He did what she couldn't, he saved a little boy, different situations sure, but she abandoned a little boy, her little boy. She left him to an unknown fate, perhaps even death at a young age, yet he grew up, waited for her, he was such a kind man much unlike his father despite being exposed to that man's violence for probably longer then even her, and yet he was nothing like his father or mother, as he had the ultimate kindness in his heart.
I want her to realise her mistakes, I want her to cry for her son, I want her to grieve him, he deserves to be grieved properly. She shouldn't get to live in a bubble of current happiness forgetting her son, forget your past husband if you wish I don't care, but your son did nothing wrong. I'm not saying she should be miserable or anything. She should just.. properly grieve him and understand how kind he was, the kind son she abandoned to a horrible life instead of taking with her grew up to be a man far kinder than she is.
The reveal is going to either tear my heart out with tears or their going to get over it in like 5 chapters and I'm going to be mildly annoyed pft there is no in-between /lh
I swear to feck if she ends up with the cat demon or anyone else for ANY duration of time I'm going to be upset. Because why tf would she. Sure I get the grand duke apparently kills or hurts her (honestly can't remember its been so long I've forgotten the plot from the start) but does his current actions not overwrite what she read(?) or saw? (Is this reincarnation, transmigration, or time reversal I can't remember, feel like it's one of the first two tho.) Like girl, he so clearly loves you and your different from the book/first life idk which, so ffs just adapt. People CHANGE. It's not a book(?) to you anymore, its a life. Istg it was reincarnation/transmigration idfk, too lazy to check ngl
Think about from her pov. You know the grand duke is an evil killer who is allied with the evil prince and kills you on your wedding day. A man pretends to be someone else to woo you and says he will save you and treats you well. When it’s revealed that he is the grand duke his love is automatically looked at as a ploy to get her into the marriage for his own personal gain. Now she doesn’t really know what the grand duke is looking for but she knows he kills his bride after the wedding so he doesn’t need her just the marriage. Would you be scared and run after the wedding or would you stay? Me personally I would get the FUCK out of there.
PREACHHH!!!! I hate it when readers say this and don't try to imagine being in her shoes. Imagine the WORSE character u could think of rn, would u not run away if they proposed to u/gave u signs of love??? If u never had love irl, then sure I get why someone would still foolishly say yes. But logically?? Let's not be dumb lol
Are you kidding me, your telling me a divine rank upgraded regeneration blessing can HEAL a hole in the chest fully and 'all old injuries' but it can't REGENERATE a chopped off limb? Fr? Such bullshit, just say you needed him to have a chopped off arm for plot reasons and get out my face, theres no way a divine rank regeneration blessing shouldn't have brought back that dude's arm fr!











Very much borderline if not explicitly sexual assault vibes a lot. Not just with the secondary characters but also the main characters. Numerous times she's said not to do something or says stop and yet he does so, despite her explicit requests otherwise. Quite disappointing and distasteful not to mention it's utterly disgusting to see.
She said no tentacles yet he did so swiftly afterwards, she even reminded him and he practically dismissed it yet still continued.
She said only within the bedroom yet he clearly continues doing intimate things outside of it as well, all whilst knowing doing so practically gives a "aphrodisiac"like affect, than uses that fact as a reason to continue.
It's still sexual assault even if they're married.
Plus it feels like in the most recent chapter at the moment (14?) that the author is trying to paint him as respectful with the memory loss thing, like he wouldn't lay his hands on her without permission? Did the author get backlash or something? Yet he has gone against her permission and wishes before and honestly probably will again.
Dude he's gross in my eyes now. Using his succubus race as a get out of jail free card for doing whatever he wants to her. Absolutely disgusting.