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I m feeling conflicted, could have been great, art is nice but I feel like it s kinda inconsistant. Ava is like "i m a troublemaker what you gonna do" like a badass woman at first and turns out to be a damsel in distress super quickly
I feel like their "chasing game" went super quick. Like it took one month for him to find her, a horse riding tour and it was done
I was hoping for something more sulfureuse, more sexy like ennemies to lovers or badass couple since they are in the mob
Ml's family is cute but super cliché
Everything is basically too quick like no romance build up, no chasing, no steamy plot I dunno
I think when the ML is that sincere, its rare to find. During their second meeting He talked to her honestly without hiding his feelings or trying to act superior. Any women would appreciate that. She had her doubts at first, understandable, but with his feeling and the way he speaks to her probably makes her feel safe given her upbringing and also feel understood and comfortable to be heard. Sometimes life just works like that.
⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ ...on a personal note after my second date with my now fiancé he was so honest with his feelings with me i couldn't just lets things end after 1 or 2 dates i wanted to know more, and I am in no way a trusting individual. But when you find someone who can speak with your inner self, you can't just walk out.
"Does this look like an impulsive decision to you?".
I don't know man, you just set the all place on fire because you were angry your toy was stolen from you. Might be.