Let this marinate for 15 chapters and I’ve been hit with a cliffhanger
I love the murderous older hyung with a unhealthy attachment trope mmhm he’s so hot
Why is Fight On Beer Boy uploaded under this title…? It’s its own independent story lol.
I don’t feel the chemistry between the leads so far… There’s not enough for me to latch onto.
I disagree ! I can feel how much they like eachother and how much oan they are in
Well
Oan= pain lol pardon typo
I love my depression with a side of porn
not a fan of the rape for garnish but otherwise i agree ( ˘◡˘ )
I bet this is a good story I just can’t understand shit or nuance because of the horrible MTL / AI translation… kinda obvious bc if this were a legit scan team there would actual pseudo names credited… not just “staff”…
I don’t like how they portrayed Ra*man. If I’m remembering correctly, he’s supposed to be outwardly more amiable and polite in his look and demeanor. But right now he looks haggard and vicious from the get-go… It’s only towards the end of this arc where his possessive, evil side shows through more, and that’s when you really get the shock of oh yeah, despite him being all courteous, he’s still a control freak ykyk.
Dang, I’ve never read the novel so thank goodness I wasn’t disappointed heavily
This actually sounds sm better, I was also expecting Rahman to be like that
So far Tei just sees Shuraka as a child, and that seems to be the only way he can accept him. Yeah, there’s some nuanced feelings Tei has for him (where did said feelings sprout from ? Who knows. Don’t get me started on how lacking their character chemistry is…) but the clear reason why Tei is doing sexual things with Shuraka, is because he views him as this kid who needs help. I don’t understand why the author doesn’t give plot space to let Tei get comfortable and adjusted to around the fact that Shuraka is an adult, BEFORE letting this sex plot happen. That’s how it should be for a story with this kind of dynamic, yet it seems the author just wants to get to the sex part already… But anyways, I hope Tei and Shuraka get some proper development soon, because I’m not into the whole “I’m an adult lending my body to this adolescent, helpless teen” type of trope. Like not even for the reasons it’s problematic— but because it’s so unsexy My dick is retracting into hibernation as we speak.
I once read a web toon were the author had to put sex scenes early on the story because the editor said she would lose her +15 category if their characters didn't have sex
She was complaining because she wanted them to be closer before that but they wouldn't let her take her time
Honestly, there’s a lot of critiques I have for this manhwa (abrupt pacing, lack-there-of character backstory, telling over showing (e.g. moments meant to highlight character chemistry ending up reading as just devices to explicate the world-building) And it’s sad because this author already has so many works under their belt, you’d think there’d eventually be one that I have no qualms with and can rate a 5/5 star…
Well, actually, my single 5/5 star might’ve been Foul’s Start, but… welp, that series is shelved isn’t it.
And Tei feelings I think they come from all the years and whatever was happening in the chapel in the white night
Rip. If this is a case where “you have to include sex within the first few chapters, or else you’re not allowed to draw sex in your comic at all” … LOWK… I would make the argument of drawing a supporting character getting it on (with another supporting character, perhaps) instead. It’s not the main couple, but depending how you write the following, it wouldn’t be completely irrelevant either, right ? But ig makes you wonder that could be the reason why so many pornhwas are porn from the get-go.
no shade, day, but have you read any other BWAT stories? this isn't the first time folks were side eyeing the character dynamic (I'm looking at you miscreants and mayhem). based on my knowledge of BWAT, these characters will most likely be obsessed with each other by the end of the series, they'll communicate their love, and probably bang A LOT.
I’ve read five (Mania, Yellow Dragon, Blood Link, Smyrna & Capri, Fouls Start). Those are the only ones that interested me, and my opinion’s based on what I’ve read. Those stories had decently sexy character dynamics, and just so far, this story is proving to not to, at least for my taste.
I see the author’s typical romance formula that you’re spelling out for me, I’m not really sure why you’re telling me it though.
bc you would’ve answered your own response if you knew BWAT’s formula that’s why i said that. we are only 17 chapters in and they usually have 60+. let it cook a lil.
Oh for sure, for sure, it’s early. I just can’t hold back my qualms when I have them… Also I think this is the first time I know I’ve been blocked by another mggo user. Just so you know, I wasn’t disagreeing or thinking there was anything wrong with what you said lol.
If u liked the story, consider buying the official ebook on bookwalker
https://bookwalker.com/series/0D903RZCEP50/jackass