'I want abortion, but early miscarriage would be bad.' MC, who is clearly a schizo.
WTF, who thinks like this? Who writes this? Moscareto, you are better than this shit, what happened, did you rot your brain to the core with too much porn?
The only way this doctor's behaviour is acceptable, if she snuck some pro choice org leaflet, but can't talk about this shit in the open.
That being said, I don't mind misery porn in my fiction, I just hate lazy worldbuilding and misery porn just for the sake of it. He can't get abortion right now? Cool, it's omega vers, we know this work differently there, just explain it why exactly he can't get abortion, is it law, is it biology, is it ultra Christian hospital he went to or simply there's admin stuff and the nearest appoontment can be made in a month? Like, dear author, don't be lazy pos and give us some kind of worlbuilding that we the Reader can get something tonunderstand what why and where.
Because this- it's just things for the sake of things. This is no plot, this is just boring, lazy writing.
So Geayson isn't some kind of masterminding psychopath, but bona fide spoilt idiotic nepo baby who was never told 'no, bad Grayson' in his life?
He's just too stupid to function like a human being?
That's actually hilarious.
I don't know, this is just the epitome of mediocre, the plot pote but not in n interesting way, things just happen one after another, the main characters are such boring people, barely characters, to be fair, flat and almost with no personalities, side characters are not even really characters, just robotic tools used for exposition (why show anything, when a side character can bluntly ask about it and explain everything). The writing and dialogue is serviceable, because it is, but just that.
The art is nice compared to a sea of a webtoon slop, but even art is just... flat.
Idk, the side story is better, if only just because the ML has actual character .
Really just meh.
If 'The Washing Machine Tragedy ' by Stanislaw Lem was rewritten by fujoshi.
(Read his story, he predicted this one so many years ago, it's hilarious)
The issue with slice of life stories is that without any stakes, conflicts or personal journeys there is nowhere for the characters to evolve to.
At the beginning the conflict was for the newcomer to be accepted, the child to be named, the couple to get together. There was a conflict (will the other guy be gay enough), will the armourer rat adjust to the country side, even if the lost dad will mess around. There were some stakes.
Thus very moment? It's a cute story, but they got together, everybody around them pretend to not know, don't know or are happy for them and accepting and the child is still nameless and a charcterless ( given how long ago Ho moved in, she should be learning to walk and talk, she still looks like an oversized beanie baby). We're 3 seasons in and they didn't even talk about potential names.
The main characters barely have personalities, they seems unafected by their experience (Ho was in the army, he saw shit, he knows stuff and he doesn't even show it in his life, not even good ribbing about always folding or ironing his clothing perfectly), Haebom is just there, his whole personality is the greenest flag that ever greened. He has no flaws (and no real character too).
This maybe the greenest story with amazing art, but it does feel like it run too long. The issue is not it's slow, the issue is the story doesn't seem to go anywhere, has not actual plot or theme or even premise, only happenstances told in chronological order.
The story is great. Character development, it has actual plot that makes sense, nice pacing, good writing... it's really refreshing to have a story that's actually has well matured storytelling.
The art tho... I would really want to know what the hell was the artist's and/or their editor thought process on this one, because whatever happened stripped the artist if everything that made their art great.
At the very beginning the art is very light, colors muted and people are on the realistic side. It really fits the slice of life, more realistic and mature story But then around chapter 10 artist stopped developing that style and changed lanes into the generic manga/webtoon style.
And it's painful bumpy ride up till the end. I don't begrudge the artist's right to change, but this should be done in a sketchbook, not on a live organism that is weekly webtoon. That kind of change should take place between projects. This one looks like the artist was figuring out stylistic rules anew with every face they drew which end up with wild inconsistencies in design and at some point I wasn't even sure if the characters are even still the same people.
Only now I realise the artist is still active and does comics- except their style is so generic (even if they are better artist than good 95% of manhwa pencilers out there) that it fades into sea of webtoon art slop. It's nice to look at, but just so boring and uninspired.
I only hope it was only artist's personal decision, not pressure from the publisher.