beta
I just reread since I completely forgotten about this story--I don't like this. I don't understand why it's rated so high. The main couple is sweet, but the entire world premise just feels very predatory, & the general concept the same-sex couples are just a temporary thing until you marry your het partner just doesn't sit right with me.
There are serious topics that are not addressed well (rushed or not at all), & the pacing overall it off. & if you just want smut...this story honestly under delivers there too. I'll just leave it at that, just needed to rant
Geniually curious where this goes. There's some solid plot potential here, but honestly this part is painful...hope it's over soon & we really build off the characters from there