WHERE THE FUCK IS DANIELS SECOND BODY THOUGH.....
Wait yeah I totally forgot about it how is he sleeping?? I thought he switched each time he slept..? What happened to his body i forgot I thought it was rescued
This is such an intricate story. The writing is a bit off, rushed in some places but overall, it's pretty neat. The black-haired dude is clearly co-dependent on the long-haired dude, from what we can make out from his diary. The long-haired dude CLEARLY knows this and was most likely exploiting him for a place to live. It's a new concept, could've been executed in a more detailed manner but this is fire too.
Oh, and, also, the fact that the diary is now embedded into the mind of our MC, making him guilty and forced that he has to help the black-haired dude is perfect. It's a good way to bleed into the mindset that our MC will most likely create an obsession — nonetheless, I absolutely loved this. This was just for me to rant about :D
(And those two characters are pretty similar looking so I can see the confusion!)
I hate, hate, hate or rather despise love triangles, but I also need the ML to be jealous af. Except I was so fucking close to dropping it though...
I wouldn't really consider it a love triangle lol. Its just jealousy arc ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶