i’ve felt this with a lot of bls but sometimes the panels feel like templates instead of good storytelling but not a single page is wasted here
he must’ve accumulated some really bad karma in his past lives to be plagued with a situationship and cheat on his kind sexy bf
i hate a “i loved him 1st” ass mf you had all this time to ask him out but you were just a fucking coward sit tf down
how tf is this mf already smacking a poor girls hand and getting jealous in the first fucking episode? he’s sick in the head bro
please please please stick the landing for the plot because it’s actually looking promising
i don’t mind the first twin actually. he was an interesting character and i actually like his personality a lot. but i feel like bring a twin cheapens his story like there was no need for all this
the pacing is dog shit. theres no mystery or tension. everything is resolved in the next chapter. its revealed that the mc's father forced him to fight the devour nachal and none of his teammates give a fuck??? lmaoo. they don't even acknowledge how fucked up that is and just move on. this story would be so good if it just took its time. why tf am I even learning about the truth about the devour nachal rn. why can't I learn about it later in a big battle reveal? even the action feels fast. each nachal power the MC acquires should feel significant so we can understand the weight of his power and and the potential risk he might face and what it means for the story going forward. instead I never feel like he'll ever lose a fight. every time he gets hurt ik he'll win and get a new power. where's the conflict? it feels like instead of making this into multiple fleshed out arcs the author is trying to race to the finish line. there is one caveat and that is that the art is absolutely gorgeous very beautiful characters and designs. its a shame
i haven’t seen such an unlikeable ML is in a hot minute.
