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This is the first story of this author that made say a "hold on girlll wait" out loud cause I felt like we jumped from chap 4 to the end of 5
The pacing was too fast in chapter 5, like it's okay to do more than 6 chaps to keep the same pacing of the story from beginning to end.
Honestly relationships that touch the theme of sex workers need a steady pacing and really good building. This was doing so great but chapter 5 was like a splash lmao.
After so many bangers, a flop story is nothing I guess
The way the author could have had advanced so much with the story if they didn't show us woojin and minho fucking every chapter I skipped those, like girlll ADVANCE WITH THE PLOTTTTTT
Third season finished in chap 95 btw and all we got was Woojin finally admitting he "loves" tae and we also get to see Tae is doing terrible in his acting job. Like please stay away from Tae, that boy deserves to heal, regain his confidence on stage, shine, be loved and JUST BE HAPPY ON HIS OWNNNNN
Woojin's back story, trauma, mental illness DO NAWTTTTT JUSTIFY NOR GIVE FORGIVENESS FOR THE CHEATING HE DID. Bebe that was not a regular cheat, that was a high class cheat, that was a CHEATEÉ
And what baffles me the most is that woojin knew, he knew how fucking bad it feels to be cheated on, HE EXPERIENCED IT ON HIS OWN SKIN FOR FUCK'S SAKE (we get to see how minho cheated on him the first time and all) HE KNEW WHAT IT FEEL LIKES WHEN THE PERSON YOU LOVE CHEATS ON YOU AND HE WENT AND DID IT TO TAE. And girlllll!!!! He was gonna continue doing so if Tae hadn't caught him likeeeeee????????
I hope I HOPE they don't end up together. Both of them need to heal and regain mental stability. That relationship cannot be put back together at all.