Guys is it just me or is the writing kinda buns...art is beautiful tho I'll give them that.
Js you
You have to admit that the dialogue feels a bit cringe at times .
From being hit by lighting ,to plunging till you're soaked by love or the rubbeenecking tourist ,Wolfie .
You know sometimes it doesn't seem like that's how real people would talk but it's been fun
AGREED THANK YOUUU
Exactly . From stuff life "Wolfie" ,"rubbernecking tourist" "take a plunge till you're soaked with love" ,yes it's very entertaining but it sure as hell doesn't feel like real people talking sometimes nor do I get a vibe that this is an athlete and a former mafioso ,more like Wattpad teens ,but hey if it's fun it's fun ig lol
I réalised I wrote the same thing twice and idk how to delete it .
Cringe
Not his chain magically getting longer in the first sex scene. I thought he was just gonna lay down and let his man ride him, but no . Apperently those were magic handcuffs that grow when you wanna bend bae over.
God, I know this won't happen but can we pls get a yuri with characters like ila and levi. PLSSSS
Me liking arrogant men being humbled has to be a kink or something. It's just too good. Does anyone have more recommendations like this ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
Have u tried Perfect Senior's Hide??
NO IM LOOKING IT UP RN ♀