I personally think that what's ruining the slow burn and progress of this story is that so many of these chapters are happening in the SAME DAYS. Very little time has actually passed in this story (Haesoo was introduced as 33, now 34... it's been a maximum ≤2 years).
With only a year or so gone by, who in their right mind would expect Haesoo to have healed after such a long marriage, and everything she's been through? Who would expect her to be comfortable with the gap between them, or even jumping into another relationship so quickly in the first place? And even with Taeha, she hasn't had any real support during all this.
The pacing makes it feel like it's been forever when it hasn't.
It's taking 5+ chapters for a single event, and it's watering down the intensity and depth of it all.
Secondly, we're getting more insight into our side characters and antagonists than we are our main couple. We know so much about Mincheol, but what do we know about Taeha? He's being put aside and turned into your every-other-story male lead. A main character shouldn't be kept this mysterious and in the dark for nearly 110 chapters. The chemistry between He, Haesoo, and the reader(s) is very quickly fizzling out.
And, in my *opinion*, the conflicts happening in this story all seem... underdeveloped, as well.
(Referring to the Taehee incident) Why turn Taeha into an overused superhuman who just had to save the day? That entire event, including the sex with other peoples BLOOD on them (Diseases, anybody?), reminded me of those old western action movie scenes.
How come good things only come to Haesoo when Taeha makes it happen? Why is she being tossed back and forth between being experienced and naive?
I'm not saying it's not enjoyable, and this is all just my *opinion*, but I wish the creator stayed on track with the idea in the beginning instead of sending us in loops.
Can someone tell me what this is about before I read it/add it to my list?
I know he do but Josh never looks like he's enjoying it
correct me if I'm wrong but it's hardly been a year or two since any of this crap went down (it went from saying she's 33 to 34 so I think it's been a year?), girl hasn't even had time to cope properly with everything that's happened to her
Am I stupid or was that condom upside down (⊙…⊙ )???
I woulda kicked him in the jaw for that sht. You can't use "it's my first time" as an excuse for being inconsiderate and ignoring your partner. If he was so eager, he should have done some research instead of thinking only with his bits. You're supposed to consider the person TAKING your junk first, not just your junk!
Original plot??? Therapy?? A logical MC with trauma that isn't his gambling dad's debt???? A puppy Ml?? In once series??? Did I dream this???
Guys is this worth it I tried it but dropped after I think 13 chapters?? Is it better??
Does anyone know any str8 or BL where the ML is actually a normal size down there? Or at least smaller than the average thigh length thang they call a penis ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I'm sorry but I actually gagged when I saw ML's penis. Does he need a doctor?? Something looked so wrong about it (not counting the unreasonable size obviously)
I kinda like that that coworker pointed our how strange it'd be to call a 34 year old auntie, poor woman has been convinced she's too old for too long :(
I'm out of things to read for the week eughh
Completely underrelated but I missed his chopped hair