So I remember it starting with uke and seme being highschool students. Seme hit him (out of nowhere and for no reason) and left a scar on uke's face, who was very confused as to why he has been hit in the first place. They didnt meet until years after. I don't remember what uke's job was but seme opened up some kind of love hotel next to his workplace. And then he stalked uke through the window when he was having *fun* by himself and thats how their relationship started I guess.
This story would work so much better if they were both actually into each other, Im talking hot and bothered and crazy seduction/attraction ... especially seeing how both have such strong characters. This "dom/sub" (if we can even call it that) stuff just aint it ... there's no attraction here, just abuse and torture
Ikr the ‘sex’ just feels meh like im literally feeling nothing reading it
Right? Where's the hot yearning? The slow-burn?? All we getting is punishments ... such a shame bc I love their strong personalities that clash
Totally agree. It would have been fun if Rian actually liked it but kind of keeping a "facade" because he doesn't want Enzo to know he feels good because of him but he just straight up is traumatized and it's kind of an awful read. Poor him.