OTL completely fails as a well written story because the author permanently sidelined the OG plot which was the love point system to force an unnecessary and artificial love triangle that should have ended in high school BECAUSE SOOAE ALREADY PICK EUNHYUK. Instead of organically rebuilding the main character's relationship through the original plot, the author brought back Dohwa just for unnecessary LT and now using Dohwa as a shallow plot device to trigger events while trapping Eunhyeok in a stunned state of misery. This constant misery,family drama and childhood abuse doesn’t feel authentic anymore. It feels like a manufactured excuse to his total lack of character progression. "He is depressed." "He didn't want to runied her peace because he saw happy." Okay valid but how long is he gonna stay in this state forever while we have to watch him willows in misery? And the author predictable decision of following the trope " he is silently devoted , watch over her from far away." How much longer will he actually progress as a character outside of this misery and communicate to Sooae? You don't ghost someone for 10 year with no explanation and expect her to have no resentment for what you have done. Is Sooae gonna be the one to pull this man out of his misery to force him to communicate with her because his is hurting when he has hurt her just as much?
No I am not a Dohwa stan or Eunhyuk stan or even Sooae stan but after reading the story the character individually just lack complexity. Their dynamic no longer feel authentic. I would have call Eunhyuk character as complex if the narrative weren't this lazy. He can express his insecurities, flaws while still having progression and moving forward even just a bit not even for Sooae but for himself during those 10 years because he could still try his best to move on while still continuing to love her instead of continuing to willows in his misery when Sooae herself has expressed her willingness to hear him out before.
Eunhyuk can be depressed. He can have unresolved trauma. He can struggle to communicate. None of those things automatically disqualify him from being a romantic lead. But what does he actually bring to their present day dynamic beyond his lingering feelings and his misery://
And also why the fuck was even Dohwa brought back in for the unnecessary LT. 10 years and bro didn't move on even a bit? He could have stayed in story through the og plot but instead the author focus on the cheap love triangle
TJ solo cult, Jo mommy association and Ian lovers just get over it. Tjian is endgame. Great. It's not like these two bitches actually got anytime to heal or get over their trauma. If you actually love TJ or if you love Ian than you'd realize that both of these bitches were entertaining and intriguing because of their relationship and feeling for each other. So get tf over it.
"TJ deserve to something more than a yw simp" they reason you come to love him because you want this type of lover in the first place.
"You're mischaracterizing Ian" when are we gonna realize that no matter how much you want people to understand him. It will never happen because they just hate him and you're just wasting your breathe. Learn to accept it.
Grayson didn't care. He didn't care in the novel,he didn't care in the manhwa. He loves Dane and IT'S FICTIONAL. It isn't a love triangle, it has a novel and it was written by Zig who made a lot of shit that doesn't make sense. You'll live if people still love Dane as they should.
I can never hate Mitsu. I adore him. I will never hate him especially when anyone with enough brain can see how this plays out how the story narrative placed him to receive hate and using him as a plot device to push the Hachi and Tate closer.
They'll either forced a throuple where Hachi is like pitying MItsu and Tate is like " I do care about Mitsu" and it's just unsatisfying. I would rather see him cry and heartbroken because of Tate than him being in a throuple with them. Hopping he'll find someone else that love him and only him.
It's clear as days that the author fav and the fan fav is Hachi x Tate and since everyone and their ancestors hate Mitsu. It's only right he'll be with me instead. Don't really want a stupid throuple when it's clear that two people mutually like each other and one being left out ://) my baby Mitsu pls choose someone else or just come to me instead of letting everybody dog pile on you. Idk ATP I hope the author just take him out of the manga. Stop playing in his face.
How I think Grayson VS Chase will respond
Koi: what would you do if a bully say your mom is a fat bitch?
Chase: at least she is mine.
Koi: What would you do if a bully say your mom is a fat bitch?
Grayson: I mean....
Why did this just made me love Nanjo more? I can't stop laughing at how he don't care.
Second male lead syndrome is high-key ruining story. I'm starting to think that the Jo stan stay insulting Ian and saying TJ and Ian will be miserable because they know that realistically Jo will probably never truly recover or forget about Ian. He can go build a life and be with someone else but he'll probably randomly think about Ian from years to years. He could be sitting in old age and remember the guy he saw on the balcony.......I can't say that Ian will remember Jo in the same "hurt" context tho. Jo is probably just a part of some wonderful memory........ actually y'all keep hating cus I know if I were a Jo stan I'd never get over it as well.
Imagine his grandkids randomly saying "I'm so hungry, I could eat Ian." LMAOOOOO.
Till this day we still have dumbasses being ignorant as hell over the chapter of Juhyeok supposedly taking su-ah out on a date. Calling Juhyeok ignorant and hating on him because he didn't apologize when he did but y'all were on his ass about that apology but when Juhyeok got rape with su-ah telling him that he wanted to get him pregnant because he has been ready to be a dad for while now and that bum give a half ass apology with out understanding what he did wrong, everybody cheered him on. This seme centric sucking dick mentally some of you have is astonishing.
They're cute together and I love them together but some of these readers be making me hate su-ah because of how dumb they fucking are. I don't see su-ah ass apologizing for the multiple sexual assult that he did to Juhyeok but gawd forbid Juhyeok do anything wrong tho.
The one who needs to earn someone's trust is su-ah. When su-ah learned to respect and see Juhyeok as a person outside of being with him then Juhyeok will come to terms with his feelings. When su-ah realize how his actions has consequences and how it undermining Juhyeok and he admits and understand that instead of saying sorry just for the sake of it then he'll have Juhyeok's affection. The fact he already does but he be acting a fool.
I'm lmfao like everybody has better chemistry with Juhyeok then su-ah. Daiki? Respect Juhyeok and see him as an actual human being AN EQUAL. Taejae? Has wealth, has more consent than su-ah, is interested in Juhyeok as an athlete,literally part of Juhyeok support system and I'm pretty sure he is looking out for Juhyeok in his own way so that fatass chairman wouldn't cause trouble for him. Man su-ah take some fucking note. I better not see his ass crying every sec.
I really love that TJ calls Juhyeok baby boy. Just find it so wholesome. I like them tgt lol.
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Juhyeok sit on the stairs with his head slumped down. The sight of Hae-il and su-ah stayed in his mind. Juhyeok thought that Hae-il was really pretty. His chest feels tight with the image of them hanging over his head. 'they look good together..'
A shadow cast upon him. He lift his head up and there was Taejae standing in front of him. He felt tired and annoyed so much so that he no longer felt any urge to say anything to the man standing in front of him.
Taejae sat down next to him. He lifted his hands and place it gently over Juhyeok head and softly ruffles his hair. Silence fill the place for a moment. "You're so handsome Juhyeok." He said suddenly , breaking the heavy silence. "So handsome~"
Juhyeok glared at him feeling tired and conflicted.He ignored Taejae. Then suddenly he cupped Juhyeok face "My baby boy!" He said playfully. Surprise and annoyed at his antic Juhyeok looks at him and shouted " what the hell is wrong with you?" "You're handsome~" "WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?" " You're handsome!" "Let go of me!" Taejae bursted into laughter and Juhyeok couldn't understand this man at all but it felt as though his chest felt a bit lighter. He was speechless. "The handsomest one here!~" "you're lying..." Juhyeok said with a soft tone with a soft chuckle as if mocking himself. Before Taejae could response Juhyeok look at him with a soft bitter sweet expression that couldn't be exactly describe, "How can I be the most handsome here when you're Right next to me..?" He said with a short soft laugh.
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Yeah hit me up for the fanfiction.
The author said that Juhyeok isn't going to be pregnant when the rape chapter drop. So you guys don't have to worry about that at least for now...... It's probably happen in future chapter tho
I wonder why people hate Penelope for the elekis I forgot his name?
If you're gonna accuse the mc of something at least makes sure you actually comprehend the story beforehand because now you just look like a petty bitch.
Thank god some people are actually opening their eyes and dragging this man child especially for his I'm ready to be a father comments. You can't act like an adult how are you gonna take care of a kid?
The way they are both selfish and objectified each other just in different form. Su-ah does more harm to Juhyeok and yet no one wants to fully acknowledge that without pushing it back and frame Juhyeok being the only one treating su-ah like an object. The fucking sympathy because You're a top and pretty is too clear.