Author just lost sight of what story he wants to make. It was good until chapter 43, after that, it became a generic ass webtoon.
The first 10+ chapters were hard to read, because it’s mostly about the despair you’d expect from a typical webtoon with a neglectful husband. But if you stick with it, it does start getting better.
I started asking questions, like how human nature always tries to find something to blame. It made me think more about different people’s perspectives, and what actually makes them the way they are. The weight of decisions, and the consequences of the choices we don’t take. The responsibility for our own happiness and future.
Sometimes, we just need to listen a bit more, try to understand.
Because love is patient.
The story was peak up until the persimmon poisoning. After that point, it becomes disorganized and unfocused. There’s little meaningful character development, and most of the side characters are sloppy and forgettable. The main character also lacks clear goals, which makes the plot feel directionless. Without proper buildup or anything compelling to anticipate, the story ends up feeling like a waste of time.
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They will get married ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Ray is bold asking asking a kiss from the Prince everytime he wants it. ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
Omg how u know? Is the raw completed?
Thank you
Thans
you're a savior TT
Hello, I was reading it maybe weeks ago in this site then when I came back it said that I need to get invitation to read... how to get invitation..? ┗( T﹏T )┛
Sorry I don't know either I just came back earlier to reread this but I can't access to the site any longer
That's a pity, I haven't finish reading it...
I am laughed too hard whenever I see the memes in the beginning and end of each chapter! We made it Hoes! Haha. Kudos and Thank you very much!
The characters and events are all over the place. Its disappointing cause the plot is really interesting and the art is quite good. But the characters do crazy stuff and unnecessary things, it doesnt make any sense. Theres no character development and everyone over reacts. They introduce new characters but their role is to act stupid or extra.
Wish there's another webtoon/manga that have similar plot but with a better writing.
Ikr, what even is immersion...hahaha.....
Im going to rant XD
I can say that the only good character here is the Emperor. Everyone else is dumb. The FL have some good character development, but she's so dumb when it comes to that Jin Bas****. The main villain's reason for hating the emperor is because his sweetheart died, which will eventually happen because its WAR. And their kingdom started the invasion in the first place. Its too shallow. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Every other character knows that Jin guy is suspicious but they allowed him to be near the royals and they allow him to manipulate them buy listening to him telling them nonsense.
This webtoon had more potential, I am disappointed that this is what we got. Hoping for better season 2. I just want the Emperor to be happy.
I am looking forward to the memes at the end of every chapter. I love the 'TRASHTA' in the natural habitat. XDヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Thank u very much for translating and sharing it to us plebs. Labyu guys!
The storyline and characters are interesting.
Gul is so cute and funny I laughed too hard in some of his scenes.
The orcs are badass. (づ￣ ³￣)づ
I highly recommend reading this. Hoping for more chapters!
This is one of the best isekai adaptations I’ve read. The author doesn’t ignore the MC’s original life or her knowledge of the story, which makes her feel far more believable and grounded. Those background actually affect her, her decisions and how she navigates the world. She’s an actual duchess who works, takes responsibility, and gets things done. She’s fearless, capable, and never written as someone who constantly depends on the male lead.
What I really appreciate is that the author doesn’t just tell us she’s amazing — he actually shows it through her decisions, strategies, leadership, and the way she thinks under pressure.
The male lead also has a genuinely believable reason for growing attached to the MC. Unlike a lot of generic MLs, his feelings don’t appear out of nowhere. He actually sees how capable the MC is and started admiring her for it. He struggles because he doesn’t know how to process these new emotions and the fear of losing her, which makes his character feel much more relatable.
And I especially love the little sister. The story doesn’t excuse her behavior, but instead shows her slowly learning and growing. The part where she manipulates situations to get her way, then realizes how much it hurts her sister, was handled really well. It feels like the author genuinely cares about character development instead of relying on clichés.
I also like that the MC challenges the ML to be more truthful and realize his feelings himself. Its sad to see the misunderstandings now but I know they'll find a way to be together.
I also love the way the Author shows adult themes here, no need to be shy about having intimate nights with the characters, no 50 chapters of blushing just by having a kiss.
Can't wait for more. Cant believe this webtoon rating is only 9. This deserves 10!!
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It's only bcoz of you that I'll start reading this story, your review I believe will convince many more to give it a shot, nicely written.
Agreed. What I appreciate the most about this is the sisterhood, which is arguably the heart of the story, not the romance. Readers often complain how in childcare stories, it's always only fathers and brothers doting on a female MC. Or if the MC reincarnates as an adult, the kid is often male. There's no mother figure present more often than not. This story breaks all those tropes. MC is a mother as much as a sister, and that little murder muffin is certainly much more interesting than the average perfect protagonist lmao
Glad I made you read it. Hoping you like the story too. ヾ(☆▽☆)
Right? Its refreshing to see a different take to this. Love the sisterhood, and the MC just being bad ass. Its exciting to think about what would the little sister do next.