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THIS WAS SO CORNY LMAOOOOOO
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I have to warn you again, it's super duper long. And the first chapters were a bit slow-paced, so you may get bored. But if you stick around, I promise you'll love it. I don't even know your type , yet um still certain nobody could possibly hate that novel xD it's the best piece of literature I've ever read, that's for sure (at least, I've never been this attached to any other work). Like, it took me months to finish it, and I still wanna reread it (and I never reread anything).
The fact that we're talking so seriously about this in the comment section of a lame yaoi manhwa is ridiculous af but I hope you enjoy LOTM
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I genuinely am getting pissed off with Karl’s inner monologues. It literally hogs panels for NO REASON.
Ash asking If it’s too much and Karl going: “Is it too much? No, it isn’t too much.” In his MIND actually pissed me OFF LMAOO. WHY—WHY DID WE HAVE TO READ THAT?!??? That took up TWO PANELS?? And sometimes he just repeats himself, especially when he does stuff like: “This is my first time...” I could get drunk by the amount of times he says that—the amount of times he’s THOUGHT about it actually. It’s just driving me crazy. Because a chapter could just be panels upon panels of a character asking/telling Karl something and him going on this long inner monologue just to verbally say “No/Yes/Not really.” Like we could have just been SHOWN his response. Man I don’t know. I might just be nitpicky, but I’m starting to believe that’s why we’re always just left with these cliffhangers that USUALLY ALWAYS END WITH ASH SAYING/QUESTIONING SOMETHING. It’s becoming redundant.
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YES! Exactly what I was talking about! I beg that I can’t be the only one that found it a prevalent problem. You seriously can’t look me in my face and think Karlyle’s inner monologues AREN’T panel hogging. Even in the context of sex scenes, us having to read this dumb inner “turmoil” of him thinking “is this too much?!” “No. It isn’t too much” is an absolute joke of a panel.
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you're so real omg. I've always thought the same about the story recently.
Somehow anyone who says anything like this here gets huge amounts of dislikes and is automatically branded as a hater.
but I'm DEFINITELY NOT hating nor am I saying
that I dislike the entire story. It's just valid points being made about very obvious things in the manhwa.(´・ω・)
“WHY, I OUGHTA!” HAHASLMFOABABAHAHAHAHA CORN BALLLLLL
IJBOL