*hysterical crying in a corner*he deserves better
(Spoilers)
I crying so hard i cannot even i already started weeping when its was first revealed that he was an orphan , and then showing him not knowning his birth day, followed up by the only present he ever reciv3d being a worn out picture book, and a critical hit was him just straight up willing to die for two children and him accepting the role as hero because he saw the hope it gave them , i fucking chocked when the creator said that no one would miss him or know he died because he wasnt important and the fucking cherry on top was seeing him cry as the kids gave him that book
AND I FUCKING LOST IT WHEN I SAW HIM BEEING A ORPHAN AGAIN AND HIM JUST SITTING THERE WAITING KNOWING THAT H3D GET NO PRESENT LIKE BITCH CREATOR COULDNT YOU HAVE HIM REBORN IN A HAPPY FAMILY ???
AND GIVING HIM ANOTHER PICTURE BOOK ??? LIKE OMG IN HIS PREVOIUS LIFE THE PICTURE BOOK OF A GREAT HERO AND A DRAGONS FRIENDSHIP WAS HIS TREASURE AND NOW IT A PICTURE BOOK FILLED WITH MEMORIES HED ALMOST FORGOT AND THE PEOPLE HE LOVES HE WILL HAVE TO WAIT A LIFETIME FOR TO SEE THEM??? I CHOCKING
Me :
https://me.me/i/pyyywwrffrss555-ffrywwwww-yyy-hey-check-out-how-hard-i-can-9e98ca10abfa4f67a8d0a432c80bdfba
CAN WE JUST FUCKING ALREADY GET A FUCKING DIVORCE FROM THUS DISGUSTING MAN CHILD??? AND CAN I PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE GET A STORY WERE ITS SHOWN THAT OUR FEMALE MC IS STRONG WITHOUT PUTTING HER THROUGH SUFFERING??? EXSPECIALLLY BECAUSE /OF / FOR A MAN ??? THIS SUCKS EVERYTHING SUCKS SOMONE PLEASE RECOMMEND ME SOMETHING WHOLESOME IM CRYING
If you would really like a nice story, with well written characters and a female main character who doesn't have to suffer (unnecessarily because there's a brainless male lead), I really recommend you read Dengeki Daisy. It's a completely different genre compared to this story (still shoujo), but I assure you it's worth the read and tears.
Bad plot
Bad characters
Bad development
Underwhelming ending
General lack of any kind of effort
Misleading titel
Background that confuse
(Depth perceptions ever heard of that?)
Final verdict: dont do this to yourself life is to short
(Lmao i only read this because i was 100% sure that this was another dumb porno were i could laugh at rhe shit story and make memes avout it but this is just boring)
Ther last chapter was the epitome of complet deranged shitshow i can fell the
authores
'i-tried-really-hard-to-build-an-intersting-and-compelling-story-in-five-chapter-and-i-literally-bit-of-more-than-i-could-chew-so-now-i-ave-to-shove-that-ending-that-minght-need-2or3-chapter-into-one-and-no-one-will-be-happy-about-this'
vibe
Like come on i cant be the only one who belives that the ending was rushed











Is wrong with mister oh so important crown prince get yo shit together and stop throwing a hissy fit you dumb fuck boi aint no body after yo bitch ass bottom at least not our main gurl dude seriously yo sis has better things to do than go after jo boi toy
Take a break and go see a doctor yo ass is acting schizophrenic and not in a way that minght be an important character trait/flaw
Go back and take a look at his eyes when he tries to remember the past. Obviously there is more going on than something to do with a mental illness that people CLEARLY don't understand. But in either case people with schizophrenia (just like people with forced amnesia) also know right from wrong. He's still being a dick. Just not the way you imply he is.
Lmao i SAW but until the author actually gives me someone else to hate i am going to aim all this complicated feelings at him but i promis that as soon as the truth is revealed and it shows us that he aint did nothing wrong on his own will im the first person to apologise to him
After all i am not a monster and to be proven wrong is a perfect opportunity for growth.
(On the other hand if it shows us that he got into it because foolishly made a miscalculation and made a deal or whatever with the wrong person causing hik to be cursed i AM GOING TO cal him stupid but that will be the worst insult i am throwing at him in said scenario)