This pornhwa was so fucking slutty just for it to have some romantic/intimate end dont get me wrong, I LOVE intimacy, just this ending was a downer. Thankfully it looks like there'll be side stories, either AUs or not, and i hope they'll bring back the previous essence of the story before the last few chapters
Today I had scroll past the entire chapter, I genuinely couldnt watch
Reading this, watching the anime, I get so happy and cry so easily my fav pairing in all of romance
I'm crying oh my god, "I never imagined the day he'd consent!" Is literally what they're saying at the end
The bar is in hell
he knotted in the air omg, my prayers from before have been answered
i thought i was the only one!!!! after rummaging through omegaverse this might be the only one who has that scene ughh i can be at peace now
First, I'm actually personally glad it was fast paced because that would of hurt even more to read.
Lots of plot holes though because of this speed. This author could definitely cook up a good story if they improved on their pacing. There would be more space to further develop the profile of the characters.
We never got any specifics on that old chairman and what he did, but that could of been a choice on purpose which I respect. It wss already so saddening to see. The whole Nagi and Song history isn't touched on well enough. Hosu? Hosu's past and cgaracter should've had more details and background. He brings up how his dad told him his weird nausea made him weak, and that he couldn't believe what his father had done,,, but the author doesn't really explore that. I think Sohu got the least amount of writing, all he felt like was just a male lead, not much else. Nagi's character development seemed too quick, more like a flip of a switch. Another thing, Nagi would become a victim, but then move on from it quickly. I can see this because he's dealt with worse, but I also dont think it would've been in the way the author showed. Him becoming more of a "husk" would make more sense. Someone who has just given up.
Lowk, this was some Disney movie ending
There was an idea of a story, but the author poorly executed it. I wonder if anyone even reviewed this story before it was put into production, and i wonder if there was even a plan on how to tell the story. I was definitely invested, but Jesus that writing was terrible lol. I hope someone around this author can actually help them improve and later produce something better.
Why would you go in there in the first place, even if it's your crush asking you to Fridges are already gross, I've cleaned enough of them to know. There goes his cute crush though
"I've been sucking your cock" to a female is some of the WORST and LAZIEST translations I have seen, this has to be AI oh my god. His face already looked stupid but I can ignore that,, what I can't ignore is that translation. I am on the edge to just go fucking buy this manhwa myself out of sympathy, maybe even empathy, for the author. To lazily translate is crazy. Does proof reading not exist??? What was the point of going to highschool? This is the easiest stuff ever to fix
all of the translations that end in -scan are ai
Yeah, the only good and not weird scanslation group I know of is Occultscans
I thought this was an entertaining story, very big second hand embarrassment from the mc. But the comedy/yearning aspect just disappeared. Not MLS, but yk. I didn't read the chapter 6 because honestly, I was bored. I was getting annoyed too with mc because robot dick aint that good. I felt more bad for the real human ml. I know the author is writing this on purpose, but their idea and main themes didn't stick together.
I LOVE love triangles, but I just can't love this. Though I can still see the appeal the story has to others. This is just me getting my thoughts on this manga out. Maybe the whole robot aspect isn't my favorite. I'm unsure.
But yeah, the writing doesnt seem to be consistent.