The paneling was top tier, choosing the perspectives, showing the mood,, the transitions were so smooth and made sense. I loved the colors too. Buuuttt it being their first comic,, it really does show. The climax? Didn't hit that hard. I feel like there were more thoughts and emotions that should of been displayed. But I think they did good for their first go. Short, perfect for a learning start
I just went on about what's being displayed, revealed,,, the personality and attachment disorders that were developed through childhood. I won't try to actually diagnose him because I'm not a psychologist, but literally so much can go into developing these disorders. Even the way the mom talks to the baby in the womb. You could even use the medical term "narcissist" for him. The backstory doesn't try to make you forgive his actions, it doesn't brush them aside,,, he still recieved the consequences. And as the title suggests, he's delusional which isn't helping. This shit ain't "yearning",, it's mental illness. And it's heartbreaking. This is a worse depression than he suffered while in the foster shelter, he doesn't believe anything is going to get better. It literally falls under "depression" but ignorant idiots want to call it "yearning". Now he's staring at a razor blade. I personally felt triggered by this. The way he is thinking and then looks at the sharpest object in his vicinity.
This is why you can't go into the comments of anything that relates to trauma (and the results of it) or mental illness,, people dumb it down. Though I am grateful to see some people who actually have brains and empathy.
I mean yeah, she's obviously cheating, but some people are getting too personal with this. The author has made their intentions with this manhwa perfectly clear, so don't go expecting actual decent morals. It's unrealistic, it's embarrassing, it's funny, and it's hot. Creator wanted to make a bunch of different sex scenes, they just need to add a little plot to drive the story forward to those scenes. If you want a real romance, this is not the manhwa for you. This is your 'shut your brain off' manhwa you use as a break from a bunch of deeper stories you read. And no, I'm not saying it's right to cheat,,, I'm focused on the creator's intentions. they're written to be a specific way, so don't act like you know them personally and just either drop it or keep reading
Reply to me next time because this is damn near obviously about what I said.
The artist doesn’t really draw condoms or birth control but obviously it’s a pornwah no one really cares about that. My brain clearly works differently from yours so of course what you “ignore,” isn’t the same for me. There is nothing wrong with that.
I didn’t question the authors intentions or make anything personal. I commented on whats been shown. The boyfriend has trauma. Trauma should be treated with therapy. If she’s gonna be as wild as her senpai she shouldn’t be in a relationship. She should talk to her boyfriend after having sex with 3 different people to confirm weather or not that’s even okay for him.
However /should/ is a possibility. It’s not a demand that the author has to make happen. We’re reading on an illegal site they’re never gonna see these comments. Stop creating criticism to defend when there was none to be found. Just what did you take personally from what I said?
But this time it's non-con sex,,, them being drunk and saying they want to does not equal true consent. As I'm reading this, I don't think the author thought that hard about the fact this is all straight up criminal. Yeah they know it's bad, it's going to hurt the character, but it's as if they don't fully understand the actual impact of activities like this. There were no actual thoughts of mc being like "i feel dirty",,, he was just pissed,,,, this can show the author does not understand what they're writing. The idea sounds great on the cover, what if a guy's two best friends made him gay haha,,,, but really it's just non-con Author needs better feedback and education on these traumatizing situations. I wish Koreans took queer SA more seriously.









I FEEL SO BAD BUT THIS IS STILL CRACKING ME UP