I let this marinated for a month and y'all telling me AUTHOR DECIDED TO ADD INCEST?! ARE WE FR???
ARE WE FINALLY GONNA HAVE A MASOCHIST UKE THAT DOESN'T COMPLAIN?! PLEASE I HOPE IT IS ONG, I DON'T WANNA GET BAITED AGAIN
Okay I will admit, I also did expected this would happen but I kept coping thinking author would AT LEAST think differently. Well, what do I know? I'm just a fat fucking chud to hope the toxic relationship is mostly about hurting each other emotionally, not fucking both
Not even gonna hope yujin to dump his ass knowing the patterns.
Gen, I'm surprised that so many ppl aren't defending this shit(on here, not other socials), I expected that most of y'all would dickriding author which I'm glad you guys didn't. This author deserve to get critisize to hell. I don't give a shit if they can't handle criticism, you get what you deserved.(except death threats, don't actually do that to the author) ://
I was hibernating this manhwa cuz I wanted to read this when it's finished but I got spoiled from YT shorts that apparently Aaron sa'd yujin??? Which is confusing bc he never seemed the type of guy to do that, it literally came out of knowhere??? Sure they fuck a lot but it was consent, what the hell is going on here
You can still enjoy the porn btw, not asking ppl to not read or shame ppl who likes reading it. This is just my opinion abt the story so don't take it srsly :))
the good:
- the art is nice, I like how they did the shading and the consistent of the anatomy and the smut is phenomenal
- the story is really fucked up, I feel bad for the thief but then again.. The seme was already fucked up in the head
The bad:
- the story isn't really that deep tbh, I get it, it's porn w little plot expected, but at least give us some snippets of what happened after the end of the story
- the plot is confusing, I couldn't really understand what was happening or why the seme did it other than his loved one got molested. That's pretty much it
Overall, it's not really great(as expected) so pretty much try not to take this story too srsly like what I'm doing. Reading it for gooner reasons or bc I want to read something bizarre or both lol
This is a porn bl manhwa so I didn't pretty much expect anything but I think the author tried to put some plot but it didn't really work out that much and it gets resolved too quickly.
Man, I wished the author let their imaginations go wild on the elves instead of letting us imagine it, like author, trust me, MY IMAGINATION IS ASS.
Overall, it's nice. Didn't really take this story seriously(like I said, it's a porn manhwa) so I don't have much problem w the rape as long as the relationship between MC and ML are fine.
As a person who prefers reading stories w smut but not too much focused on smut(i only read smut w no plot bls if I feel horny and don't take things seriously), I'm really enjoying this slow burn ngl. I don't like VERY slow burn but this is one is really I enjoy the most, I like how author focuses on how to develop their relationship as the chapters go on. It'd be also weird if the smut happens too soon considering their maturity gap isn't balanced yet and changdeok is still trying to get used to this so be patient guys (￣∇￣")
I feel like ppl who enjoyed seeing Grayson get raped are just ppl who despise Grayson a lot. I'm not saying all Grayson haters are like that but its such a high possibility. I mean I've seen so many hate comments of him(some are valid) to the point I've also started seeing some comments that he deserved to get raped and I'm like, what the fuck??? It's to the point it's just becoming so fucked up.
I'll say this again: I'm not defending Grayson or anything, I do find him AND Dane as assholes and I tend to wish I could just punch them to reality but wishing upon others, especially fictional characters to get raped is NEVER the solution. If you're the type of person to say these things, you need to time out from the internet.
When I was reading this, its plot is similar to "How to tame a knight" And I wouldn't be surprised if they're the same author or artist except this story more toleratable and uke is a bit realistic to say the least. I don't know how to say it but uke is aware and embarrassed how he enjoyed the sex despite knowing it's technically rape... He's also very horny so that's something. Seme doesn't technically know the boundaries and only learned abt wanting to have children. Not excusing his actions, but tbf, they're aliens who lives in just lava and rocks.
The seme and uke are both hot but it reminds me from "how to tame a knight" Except its futuristic and seme is considerate and caring.
I love how they don't focus much on the omegaverse aspect and treat it like it's normal part of their life and not to be taken as a big deal. I like it, wish some omegaverse were like this.
This is like, the grow up version of themselves and I'd always give it 10/10 bc of how peak author was cooking when making this. I still find it funny how the author was struggling to give the tan and uke their happy "ending" On what if.
The character development of the tan guy is crazy tho, I still hate him but damn, 5 years later and this calm?? The way MC wouldn't give him a hug and say "we aren't friends" Typa shit WAS BRUTAL. Deserved honestly lmao. I almost felt bad when I saw him cried ngl, keyword; almost.
I hope he does get his own happy ending someday. I know what he did was unforgivable, and he's owning up for what he did but I'm not asking for him to forget those, I'm asking him to work harder to be not that kind of an asshole anymore and teach other people not to be the kind of person he was before. MC will never forgive him even when he becomes a better person, rightfully so, but maybe he'll learn to forgive himself someday.
First of all, Let's give a round of a plause for the author for giving the characters such complexity. I love how the author writes these characters, they put so much love to these goobers and I was so emotional reading this shit bro.
Second of all, thank fuck the MC gets his own happy ending. The fact the SA/rape wasn't romantisized or forgiven AND MC ACTUALLY NOT FORGIVING THE TAN GUY IS SUCH A FUCKING GOOD FEELING. The amount of times I've seen so many rapists from other BLs I've read so far get forgiven by uke pisses me off so bad bro like get out not to mention the triangle relationship as well, it even pisses me more when the uke gets together w a red flag guy instead of a green flag dude who would literally cherish him. I'm glad the author broke that second ml curse cuz oh my god, I love them so much already.
And lastly, the art is on point! For a story like that, it really also fits the art style even more for some reason.
I've seen some ppl say this is a smut w no plot when there's obviously some?? Sure, it's not that well-written, but there's still some plot in it so it counts.
It's really nice story, I love that it has poly, as a polyamorous person myself, it feels nice ngl.
Can't wait to see the ending so I can rate the story, I'll just say that I'm enjoying the story so far. I love nox, one of my fav characterヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ
Gen, like why are we being so unfair w the ratings??? Sure, the story ended too short, but other than that, it's not THAT bad so what's w the many 1 star?! The constant switch up is just fucking crazy holy hell bro. This is why never trust all ratings cuz look at this shit!