First of all, Let's give a round of a plause for the author for giving the characters such complexity. I love how the author writes these characters, they put so much love to these goobers and I was so emotional reading this shit bro.
Second of all, thank fuck the MC gets his own happy ending. The fact the SA/rape wasn't romantisized or forgiven AND MC ACTUALLY NOT FORGIVING THE TAN GUY IS SUCH A FUCKING GOOD FEELING. The amount of times I've seen so many rapists from other BLs I've read so far get forgiven by uke pisses me off so bad bro like get out not to mention the triangle relationship as well, it even pisses me more when the uke gets together w a red flag guy instead of a green flag dude who would literally cherish him. I'm glad the author broke that second ml curse cuz oh my god, I love them so much already.
And lastly, the art is on point! For a story like that, it really also fits the art style even more for some reason.
I've seen some ppl say this is a smut w no plot when there's obviously some?? Sure, it's not that well-written, but there's still some plot in it so it counts.
It's really nice story, I love that it has poly, as a polyamorous person myself, it feels nice ngl.
Can't wait to see the ending so I can rate the story, I'll just say that I'm enjoying the story so far. I love nox, one of my fav characterヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ゙
Okay, genuinely this shouldn't get a 5 from me, but the premise was so depressing and interesting. And also, the genre of this story shouldn't deserve to have romance in it CUZ THE ROMANCE IS NON-EXISTENT.
Bro got violated many times by the demon, even when he was pregnant and in front of his allies, the only time he gets to have his romance is when after he gets betrayed by ppl he cares abt which is like... Sad. (tbf, he doesn't care anymore so lol) He finally gets to have his revenge, but still, I can't help but be a bit horrified by it, but that's what the story started tbh so I should've expected it
I like how he's still the same dude except he's a little bit more fucked up in the head bc of the betrayal. Bro is embracing his dark side
There's four MLs, all of them look hot, they're my type. I don't expect this story to be well-written, but I was honestly hoping the tentacles guy would be together with uke. Out of all of them, he was very attentive and genuine about MC, I mean the aftercare?? The blush?? The way they looked at each other? This is why I hate the second male syndrome but the angel guy is fine ig.
Uke is... Okay? I've seen and read w petite bottoms and I didn't mind them but I've never felt so uncomfortable abt a uke's anatomy before... Even the pregnancy made it look weirder, look I'm all for mpreg, in fact, I'm into that shit but it just look so out of place, it's like they put it there like a sticker and call it a day. It sucks we weren't able to see the baby, like what's the point of adding pregnancy if you're not even gonna show us what the baby looks like?
Lastly, the art style is amazing tho, I love the shades and the way they draw the hair and the eyes! Very nice.
Also, don't take my opinions too seriously, I'm not saying y'all shouldn't enjoy it, at the end of the day, we're all strangers who we somehow see each other in other stories sometimes so read this if you guys want to goon lol. (Except bigoted opinions, don't try to be a bigot)
Nah, I'm with you. After reading it till the end, I just feel like artist's forte is drawing handsome semes because the uke's anatomy isn't right especially when the uke's side angles looks not proportionate. My pet peeve was the uke's very long neck and very long body from chest to hips because it didn't look correct (?). I was also weirded out and concerned on why is the uke becoming very pink during those bed scenes like wtf is going on. But damn I'm a sucker for yanderes like the angel guy .










This is like, the grow up version of themselves and I'd always give it 10/10 bc of how peak author was cooking when making this. I still find it funny how the author was struggling to give the tan and uke their happy "ending" On what if.
The character development of the tan guy is crazy tho, I still hate him but damn, 5 years later and this calm?? The way MC wouldn't give him a hug and say "we aren't friends" Typa shit WAS BRUTAL. Deserved honestly lmao. I almost felt bad when I saw him cried ngl, keyword; almost.
I hope he does get his own happy ending someday. I know what he did was unforgivable, and he's owning up for what he did but I'm not asking for him to forget those, I'm asking him to work harder to be not that kind of an asshole anymore and teach other people not to be the kind of person he was before. MC will never forgive him even when he becomes a better person, rightfully so, but maybe he'll learn to forgive himself someday.