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dontay August 9, 2026 6:53 pm

the way this author writes the characters is so annoying, the main couple, the old man, almost every character in the story so far has been so unlikable. the only two characters i don't dislike are the alpha upperclassmen from the second couple (character with the least amount of scene time) and daiki (just introduced and barely been around to have impact on greater story outside of his tragic side plot).

dontay August 1, 2026 5:48 am

it's omegaverse and the ml is a beta but wait actually he's an omega breeding sow but he's also in a prestigious academy but also the older brothers are in the army as highly ranked officials but also the oldest brother is running shit like a mob boss with goons but also they're a noble family and it takes place in a victorian historical setting where the tech is steampunk but basically advanced enough for modern standards but also there are random CAVEMEN with MODERN AXES FROM HOMEDEPOT-LIKE WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON, pick a plot, pick a lane, and fucking stick to it.

    minty01 August 1, 2026 6:53 am

    deadass i’m a bit lost with the setting of the story the author can’t world build for shit

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