A flat pancake bcuz this webtoon isn't about Mc's badassery, its MC's journey to 'How to mess up a established concept and genre with brainholes!'
Just some criticisms here and there:
Chap 1: Not "No matter how many times I regress, I couldn’t get used to it."
Should be "I regressed too many times, I'm so sick of seeing it."
You said so yourself that you were tired?! How did regression traumas fixed your optimism back?!
Chap 2-4: Really? MC monologues? DON'T BE LAZY AND DRAW SOME FLASHBACKS!
YOU'RE TRYING TO DEVOUR THE STORY TOO MUCH THAT YOUR PACING BECAME ANOTHER TYPICAL 2D CARDBOARD BORING!
Chap 6: So what happened to villain after? An influential person didn't even made a splash? HOW MANY SKIPS IS THIS?!
Chap 18: Bro, don't know where to get elixirs after 15 regressions? And he's humanity's savior?! Whoever put regression skill on this dude must be shaking his goddamn head.
Other things: SO WHEN'S THE WORLD GONNA END?! Thought you're handing the job to others yet there is no deadline? Are we just gonna pretend you're smart when everything else is dumb down? You know the future, right? Right? RIGHT?! You still want to save the world right? SO WHY EXACTLY CAN'T YOU JUST MONOPOLIZE SOME FUTURE RESOURCES AT THE PRESENT TO EMPOWER THOSE WHO DESERVE IT THAT HAS A HIGH PROBABILITY OF SAVING THE WORLD?! WHY NOT GO GET SOME STONES THAT INCREASES MANA, HP, STRENGTH, OR SOMETHING? WHY ARE WE DOING THINGS LIKE ITS A SLICE-OF-LIFE ABOUT BABYSITTING NOOB PLAYERS WITH TRAINING ARCS?! AT THIS POINT, IT FELT LIKE "I FAILED MY PREVIOUS REGRESSIONS BECAUSE IN THE EARLIER YEARS, I SPENT IT CHILLIN'!"
And again, why are we getting entangled with some guild just because you hate their attitude? We aren't even getting flashback about your previous regressions, so why are you jumping all over the plot? WHAT EXACTLY DO YOU WANT ESTABLISHED AFTER SAYING YOU WANT TO RETIRE?!
Anyway, bro can sucker punch rankers with an E stat and gearless. How fast is growth rate again when he's stuck training others and now rarely grind? Yep, the sytem must be dead. And constellations? They're just names with free gifts *laughs sarcastically*.
And yes, its introducing the characters but we don't really care. Why?! BECAUSE A ONE SENTENCE IN A BUBBLE SPEECH LEAVES NO IMPRESSION WHATSOEVER!! The artist focused too much on physical background and obviously not good at atmospheric and abstract backgrounds like exag facial expressions, silhouettes, some representations to add more depth.
So much for that, its good---when you're bored and doesn't want to think shutting your brain while skipping all trivial details or at this point, 50% of the plot
Boi that hurts...
But don't worry, one date would solve it all
SPOILER ALERT (Cause the raws were too funny I can't help sharing ):
This is the first I met an ML who would break or throw away MC's pop up game panel. I mean isn't it annoying when an MC is just on his/her own world of games and target Love Interest without knowing, and when they get together everyone acts like its all normal. BRUH, I'M LOVING ILYA SO MUCH ESPECIALLY WHEN HE SAW HIS LIKE POINTS! Lol. He's like a king of bugs, game devs should just reset the whole game, no reset the whole world. Bwahahahaha
The art looks like its an anime for kids, I wasn't turned on, it doesn't even look that sexy... So why am I still reading this?
they're so cute.... then there's that icky feeling of the calm before the storm (〜￣△￣)〜
I almost forgot about this sweet chaotic couple if it didn't update. Thank u for coming back!
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lets us pray they'll green light this soon! It was getting good until real people came with dramas that ruin themselves （/TДT)/
Wow, this webtoon really likes skipping everything. From events to where whatnots came from, unfinished dialogues, explaining the power structures, random scenarios where everyone can conveniently ruin everyone's lives but still live after, everyone threaten to dies all of a sudden because it is convenient plot device, everyones motivations and nature revealed by speeches, OP skills and gears pulled under the author's pant's blackhole. EVERYTHING APPEARS BECAUSE MC JUST PULLED SOMETHING FROM THE MAGICIAN'S HAT!
Remind me again why most chinese action MC are not popular because they suddenly remember they have ancient op items that is conveniently revealed in speech bubbles.
Ok but the concept is literally my intrusive thoughts. THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I WISHED I COULD CRAWL OUT OF THE OTHER END OF THE SCREEN TO THREATEN PERVERTED HAREM AUTHORS!
IF YOU DARE ADD ANOTHER CHARACTER TO FALL IN LOVE WITH YOUR LAME*SS PROTAGONIST, I WILL KILL YOU!!!
Drop this at 20 now checking up on 40 and realizing...
Ohh. Update me when they're married and everyone is cured from all the negativity
I miss characters who destroys other people's egos and self-importance... Like can someone ruin FL's whole family's lives already?! I saw the raws and everyone seems to be living pretty well till chapter 58. Larc can stop acting like his relevant or something, his narcissistic feels is getting worst
Every panel with this 2 is just oozing with SMEXINESS
SOMEONE STRAIGHTEN THIS ML'S BRAINCELLS! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA
There's something called TPO. Like if its not the right time, not the right place, not the right occasion, THEN DON'T BE SO DISTURBING!
