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I was here June 8, 2026 7:33 pm

I can totally understand why you would break up with a person like that. It doesn’t seem like you can ever let your guard down, it’s always take and never give (or just crumbs) and the trust issues, damn. You have to be 100% into that and not just because you love your partner or you’ll get tired of it. Love is not enough for this. But maybe I‘m thinking too much or this is not my cup of tea. This type of play, occasionally, that’s hot, but basically every day, no pause? I feel sorry for the top.

    Cam June 8, 2026 10:49 pm

    Can you not be here anymore then?

    Fleurusufur June 11, 2026 3:03 am

    The top is where he wants to be, but you obviously don't wanna be here. So bye bye.

I was here June 5, 2026 11:16 pm

yeh, bye

I was here June 5, 2026 8:40 pm

Setting the standards low again with this one (▰˘◡˘▰)

I was here May 6, 2026 7:11 am

Why do you care and why only now and not when his life was in danger. It doesn’t matter if he is his sugar baby or his boyfriend. He was all by himself. Considering he was hunted by loan sharks and barely had friends because he worked so much, it would be completely understandable if he got himself a rich sugar daddy who handles all his money problems. How low is your empathy when you know all that.

I was here April 26, 2026 8:47 pm

I love the MC! And ML is falling in love tooooooo ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

I was here April 26, 2026 7:43 pm

Start on Wattpad (without Side Stories) and continue from ch 102 on Kiwikiwiki translation

KIWIKIWIKI Translations 102-Side Stories
https://kiwikiwikiwiki.wordpress.com/2025/08/05/the-serpent-who-swallowed-a-pomegranate-chapter-102/

I was here April 26, 2026 7:21 pm

Warning!

I am spoiling the ending: who will MC end up with and how.









Great story. But I don’t like the ending.









MC will end up with BOTH of them.
Gwen and Amon tried to kill each each other, they both almost died, Gwen was closer to death. MC was so devasted and depressed that he dissipated to kill himself. Then he was invisible and Amon and Gwen realized they have to tolerate each other to bring him back to life. So in the end MC dates them both.

I don’t like the ending because it is incredibly unsatisfying for me. The relationship with Amon is just unhealthy. It reminds me of an abused partner that can’t let the other one go although they hate them or stockholm syndrome.

    Im the biggest bird April 27, 2026 4:40 am

    Type of ending is this?? Oml this is gotta be the worse I've read...

    Indecisive and messy!

    I was here April 27, 2026 9:07 am
    Type of ending is this?? Oml this is gotta be the worse I've read...Indecisive and messy! Im the biggest bird

    Exactly… ╥﹏╥ I was frowning more and more when I read the side stories. I have a hard time getting over „bad“ endings, so I like to know before I immerse myself, my feelings and hours of my time into a novel when I could be productive. Procrastinating feels worse when it leaves you unhappier than before.

    Apparently, there is a novel of the same universe where the dragon couple is happier. Idk the title though. :((

I was here April 25, 2026 10:54 pm

This is literally just Stockholm Syndrome. He treats him so bad - kidnapps him, rapes him - that even basic human decency - like not raping him when he is sick or feeding him - seems like kindness to him. Bet in 10 chapters he is going to think this is „love“.
I really liked the Story idea with a hermaphrodite snail shifter, but there is no actual plot or any redeeming qualities of the ML. Then again: Sharks are really ruthless with their females, it’s basically paralyzing, biting and gangraping her. So the rapist character is actually pretty fitting for him.
But it’s not like this world is well thought out, so only taking the rapist part from the mating ritual seems unnecessary. Just leave it at the double genitals. This COULD HAVE BEEN good.

I was here April 21, 2026 5:50 am

I hate manwhore tops. Especially manwhore tops who don’t use protection.

    rish April 21, 2026 6:55 am

    SAME HERE HUN

    juni April 21, 2026 7:58 am

    Genuinely

I was here April 15, 2026 12:12 pm

I ship him with the pink haired guy. I hope they flee together. One of my strongest 2nd lead syndromes. ╥﹏╥

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