I can totally understand why you would break up with a person like that. It doesn’t seem like you can ever let your guard down, it’s always take and never give (or just crumbs) and the trust issues, damn. You have to be 100% into that and not just because you love your partner or you’ll get tired of it. Love is not enough for this. But maybe I‘m thinking too much or this is not my cup of tea. This type of play, occasionally, that’s hot, but basically every day, no pause? I feel sorry for the top.
Setting the standards low again with this one (▰˘◡˘▰)
Why do you care and why only now and not when his life was in danger. It doesn’t matter if he is his sugar baby or his boyfriend. He was all by himself. Considering he was hunted by loan sharks and barely had friends because he worked so much, it would be completely understandable if he got himself a rich sugar daddy who handles all his money problems. How low is your empathy when you know all that.
I love the MC! And ML is falling in love tooooooo ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Start on Wattpad (without Side Stories) and continue from ch 102 on Kiwikiwiki translation
KIWIKIWIKI Translations 102-Side Stories
https://kiwikiwikiwiki.wordpress.com/2025/08/05/the-serpent-who-swallowed-a-pomegranate-chapter-102/
Warning!
I am spoiling the ending: who will MC end up with and how.
Great story. But I don’t like the ending.
MC will end up with BOTH of them.
Gwen and Amon tried to kill each each other, they both almost died, Gwen was closer to death. MC was so devasted and depressed that he dissipated to kill himself. Then he was invisible and Amon and Gwen realized they have to tolerate each other to bring him back to life. So in the end MC dates them both.
I don’t like the ending because it is incredibly unsatisfying for me. The relationship with Amon is just unhealthy. It reminds me of an abused partner that can’t let the other one go although they hate them or stockholm syndrome.
This is literally just Stockholm Syndrome. He treats him so bad - kidnapps him, rapes him - that even basic human decency - like not raping him when he is sick or feeding him - seems like kindness to him. Bet in 10 chapters he is going to think this is „love“.
I really liked the Story idea with a hermaphrodite snail shifter, but there is no actual plot or any redeeming qualities of the ML. Then again: Sharks are really ruthless with their females, it’s basically paralyzing, biting and gangraping her. So the rapist character is actually pretty fitting for him.
But it’s not like this world is well thought out, so only taking the rapist part from the mating ritual seems unnecessary. Just leave it at the double genitals. This COULD HAVE BEEN good.
I hate manwhore tops. Especially manwhore tops who don’t use protection.
I ship him with the pink haired guy. I hope they flee together. One of my strongest 2nd lead syndromes. ╥﹏╥
I really like this author and the plot idea. 5 years would have been enough though. 10 years make this almost ridiculous.
I like slutty Ukes, who are not all innocent, but this is a bit TOO much for me.
Welcome to Rape 101. Todays guest is the seme from SCOOP who just blackmailed the person he supposedly loves into sex.
What does he have to say for himself? Nothing.
Is he going to do it again? Probably.
Does not having empathy excuse his deeds? Not in the least.
And the sob story that’s going to be introduced to us later on? Forget it.
Will the author try to rationalize the rape and not even call it rape? Yes, like all authors with shitty semes do.
Sorry. This is the 3rd shitty cliffhanger in a row.
To write about the beginnings of omegaverse is actually a refreshing idea
I actually always wanted a manhwa where the Top gives birth and with omegaverse and an omega as top it was possible but we don’t get a baby? ╥﹏╥
It‘s been 3 years and this is what we got. I don’t even know if this story can make up for all the disappointment it brought me. We in a toxic relationship.