Ok I was reading chapter 17 and the part where Coral Snake was writing his quote for the intro of his little article or whatever you call it was cracking me up cuz this genuinely sounded like Mina Dragonfruit for a hot second. This belongs next to "I cried, he cried, we crode," "you don't know pain until you find something on his phone you wasn't supposed to find." Ok I mean I guess it's not thatttt bad, like "so this is love, so this is what makes life divine" doesn't sound like something from a Colleen Hoover and Rebecca Yaros book collaboration with the title being some slop like "A Court of Bull and Shit." Ok sorry I'm having way too fun with this but genuinely he is the next Sarah J Maas, how does Snow tiger actually like this Coral Snake genuinely looks and has the same fashion sense as those performative male feminists (he's performative cuz he cracks guys and not girls). This gooner realllyyyyy thinks he knows love, like it has been 17 chapters. You do not fall in love in the duration of 17 chapters there is 128 chapters of this shit and you fall in love in 17???? How desperate do you have to be to do that???? Ok that last part was satire not satire. I mean I guess I would spend my money earned by writing performative tiktok poetry on goon material, like that's based
The most it could be is a shounen ai, it could have been a a yaoi of the story is continued but in the one shot everything portrayed is like, abuse. I really don't see any strong feelings. He says he's going to protect him but it isn't shown in his character. Well it's still an interesting one shot and this isn't hate. I just wished it was continued cuz it could have been so much better as a story with multiple chapters
Yo I don't understand shit cuz like I first started it when it had like 5 chapters and then I forgot and waiting for new chapters and even when a new chapter updates I wouldn't know cuz I keep forgetting this series exists even though I like it. So I forget what's going on every time I read a new chapter. And I don't like this manhwa enough for me to reread and understand the plot up until the new chapters. Sm1 pls explain
basically uke and seme are like highschool best friends turned sex partners type of shit but seme really likes uke(uke doesn't want to admit he likes seme too) and uke's dad said that he will only give uke the company if he gets pregnant. seme wants to get uke pregnant and be the chairman instead because of a bet they made in hs that uke would only date seme if seme becomes the chairman.
uke's secretary who is the heir to a rival company likes uke and rapes him after using a heat inducer on uke. seme finds out and beats the shit out of the rapist but uke stops him midway and basically he kinda chooses to ignore that he had been raped.
seme gets mad that uke didn't want to take any action on his rapist, they go no contact, uke reaches out for them to talk and reconcile?
Ahh ok honestly idk why Uke was so chill about the secretary thing tho and I genuinely liked secretary, I wanted him to get with that one guy who kinda looks like uke, and he also gave secretary the omega heat thing. I feel like there was more stuff about the company. Like they talk about the company and I'm like wtf is going on. So do u know about like all the kind of "political" info going on with the company? Sorry if I didn't explain that well lol. All I know is that there are 2 rivaling companies.
So they're all underage (at least the 2 MCs are underaged), and I saw the raws and the fox gives the puppy a blowjob??? Not to mention the weirdly unhealthy relationship the fish and leopard have?? Fish dude is like 19, barely legal. He also acts very oblivious to most things and has less of a concept to human feelings so he clearly doesn't act like 19, and he's grouped up into the same categories (class and school) as the underaged characters and while I do understand adults can hang out with minors, fish dude is like barely an adult first of all and he also ACTS LIKE A MINOR STILL. There is no switch button right when you turn 18 to be mature and grown up. Not to mention, leopard is a teacher. Student teacher relationships in the 21st century are unhealthy and predatory (in general they are unhealthy). Not to mention leopard is LITERALLY THE FISHS GUARDIAN. A parent doesn't have to be related to their child. Leopard literally ADOPTED fish guy. Like they say that in the story. And with the festival and the play thing. The whole rape thing was weird cuz it really didn't feel like they were talking about jt like it's a bad thing, they just mentioned it for shits and giggles. I don't even know how I still liked this before. I mean I don't hold a huge grudge towards this, and I don't hate it. But I will still criticize it even if I read all of it and found it entertaining. Now one thing that isn't a huge problem but I still didn't like it was the way they made the puppy act so freaking stupid and childish. Like he is genuinely a blockhead. And the fox is annoying asf for all the touchy ragebait he does. This is a me thing, but I absolutely HATE IT when someone I DONT LIKE starts touching me and NOT STOPPING. Ok sorry this was long, u can comment if u want to, u can like or dislike or u can scroll. Have a nice day
Pretty sure they mentioned that everyone is 18/19 because they're seniors in high-school and almost near graduation. So not underage sex/sexual scenes.
Also we have to remember that the leopard had a crush on the fish way before they even knew e/o right. Also, he specificlly registered him in school and he is a special case. He acts the way he acts cause he was always around fish/fish species his whole life and now he is around humans. He has zero social skills. I do get why it is seen as weird but I don't really think it's that wild esp given the circumstances. They lived tg before he even registered him into the school. But yeah, love the criticism tho
Ahh ok idk I remember they mentioned the puppy being 16. And what u said about the leopard and fish is totally fair, but I mean in the story they are like an explicit student teacher relationship tho so that's what kinda throws me off. Also though I'm just more worried about all the harassment though, like idk fox dude was kinda wilding. I completely respect ur opinion about it tho, I think the story is cute too. Sorry I never mentioned this in the OG post but I meant to say that this was my take on the story but I think I forgot to say that. I apologize if this invalidated ur opinion at all, it wasn't a hate post for fans! And I apologize to everyone who looked at this too. Anyways, thank u for sharing I hope u have a wonderful day twin
I read some of it cuz the cover page looked absurd to me and me and my friend were curious about it but our curiosity literally killed us. Piss enemas, brown dick??, using a finger as a urethra plug, a dildo and dick shoved up in MCs ass, Edwin mentioning Leila's "stinking...cunt", pissing on, fucking on horseback(ok I'm guilty of finding this funny cuz it happened in a different novel I was reading (QJJ lolllll)) and there's like so much more but u know how the brain protects urself by forgetting traumatic events, I think that's what happened. All while everything was nonconsensual. There are probably more kinks mentioned, I heard someone talking about hemmoroids and Edwin's obsession with making Leila's ass brown??? And wasn't a snake fucking Leila or smth and like Leila gave birth?? And with the brown asshole thing idk what kink that even is? Why is his dick brown?? And I check the comments to find that apparently their twin brother children get together. Incest...ok.... I have never understood it cuz like first of all it's illegal, and second of all I don't have a good relationship with my family so me personally I can't comprehend it
Noo it cut off some of it. Let me continue. Even if incest was perfectly fine and legal I still wouldn't understand it though. Finally for the people who say "oh but you read this like ur literally such a hypocrite" what r u gonna do about it puss puss I have the free speech and will to criticize something I've read (I haven't even read the whole thing btw but I can still criticize it because I HAVE FREE WILL). And if ur gonna make a story there will always be criticism (esp with some criminal shit they put in here - im talking about rape and (I've heard) borderline beastiality??? I may be wrong though please correct me and I am terrible sorry if it is wrong). The author also has the free will to write this and publish it. So y'all freaks can still get more slop from this author ig. Like maybe we shouldn't make this mainstream cuz this is just like incel gooner heaven so it should stay in the incel gooner section of yaoi. This is smth that seasoned warriors should handle, not for ppl who just started reading and accidentally stumbled across it when trying to find good ones to read. U don't need to comment but I am happy if u do. If you harass me for my opinion I'll try my hardest to be nice. And u don't even need to comment, like u can like it, dislike it, or simply scroll. Ok have a nice day
I agree w you it's so funny where you commented "This is smth that seasoned warriors should handle, not for ppl who just started reading and accidentally stumbled across "
Agree so much esp since I accidentally stumbled on ( my first yaoi) "viewfinder series".
This series is such a mess idk if I shd cry or laugh I stopped halfway
Bro rip u should have had a better yaoi experience. Go read One Room TA. Seasoned warriors with like 4 years of experience in the field should tackle this.
Yeah this whole series was such a mess, I think it was the author just making goon material for themselves and other incels, like 10/10 chance they were wanking it to this shit . Yes idk if I should laugh or cry too (hey I love u, u just made a ref to one of my fav novels - TGCF). Literally the series is a mess bruh, I think it bears Sombr level mess. Like if I was forced to read all of it or go to a Sombr concert I'm afraid I would go to his concert
I rlly can't fathom how ppl think it's ok to romanticize a literal crime of rape with this story? Like?? I heard they both raped each other too but I'm not sure. Taeju could have been cute if he didn't fucking rape the MC like in the first chapter. Taeju shouldn't have been forgiven cuz rape is honestly such a disgusting and terrible thing that it doesn't deserve for it to be forgiven. Wow and it being an Omegaverse too is crazy cuz genuinely that whole troupe is weird and misogynistic. This is coming from an Omegaverse reader (one who only enjoys it when omegas are equal to everyone else in society). Genuinely the sadness and despair i feel for the MC while reading this is insane it's like the author trapped actual souls in there. Well I mean she's given threats to those who read illegally, like ppl actually want to pay for her rapeslop. And for the animation company for LTIT threatening to doxx illegal viewers is unprofessional and illegal. Let me say it again, ILLEGAL. Y'all in the comments talking how the author is a genius meanwhile they'd genuinely wish harm on ur whole bloodline. Go read better things like One Room TA
Yo I just wanna be smothered in Shurakah and Teis big ass tits like genuinely they are massive . And I love the art, but my favorite part is more so the writing. It feels very fitting towards the setting and it's also complex and sounds good. Like it doesn't sound dumb and it doesn't sound too fancy. Ever since it released I always looked forward to my Mondays because this is so peak









Ok so like does the MCs half brother have a crush on him?? Cuz I was reading episode 12 and he's like getting flustered and blushing. Wait first of all is he related to MC. Cuz ok ik MC is an illegitimate child and the brother is the real child. But they still have the same father tho, right??? Ok I'm still on EP 12 tho, so maybe something gets revealed that they aren't related. Or the brother just doesn't have a crush on him. Well I hope we get the good ending of no incest, because this story is absolute peak!!! Thank u Jujucat for uploading the officials
LOL I totally forgot about the brother, that was hella sus of the author to add wth Koreans are never beating the incest fetish allegations
Yeah I just finished reading all the chapters that are uploaded and I still see no signs of dismissing the incest allegations