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… it’s irritating and disingenuous to have the MC constantly blushing and playing the virgin at full tilt. It’s not cute and it’s boring. The ML is far more engaging and sympathetic as a character than the supposedly modern transmigrator who should know the mechanics of the horizontal lambada and should be less pre-teen and more mature about it? Is the target demographic of this story supposed to be the tween set? All the eeking is just sooooooo lame and I’m only 11 chapters in…
…Connie didn’t go dark because of Ian. She wants to keep Bell to herself… Saw it coming but didn’t think it would go down that path with all the debutante behavior.