beta
Okay, this story was so close to be perfect, but the scene ruined it. Everything was so cute until that happened.
This is also coming from someone whose favorites are passion and POTN. Not every story needs to have that for the plot or character development
Sorry rant over lol.
I definitely thought it would get better. But it was lacking in alot of ways and way too much smut. Every scene that could be romantic or there was a chance of communication was cut off for smut