That gang r*pe scene was completely unnecessary idk what the whole point of that is. Tell me how a grandfather who is concerned about his family's legacy and image orchestrated the whole thing? It makes zero sense. The top is so uninteresting. I feel bad for the bottom, like what are the other grownups around him doing just letting him go through all that. I would have murd3red everybody on sight.
...but I really fw this story idc. I love the relationship between the MC and the ML and whatever they lack in their communication skills they make up for with their chemistry. And the secretary pining for the MC is also so good, but I think he's going to be coupled with that dude who tried to drug the MC.
I feel like the premise of MC being stuck in high school is totally irrelevant to the plot except to fetishize a man who looks like a minor. A lot of the smut scenes happen when MC is wearing a high school uniform, oversized clothes or his grandmother's floral clothes to highlight this. That seriously gave me the ick. You can still establish all the negative things that happened to the MC even without all that. The author could have even set the story during a year where he's already graduated high school but can't go to college due to his father's debts. It will literally have no impact to the story except it will get rid of all the questionable smut.
It's the part when the guild returned from the US after finishing the SS Dungeon. Hyoseop just left without a proper conversation. After making a big deal about just wanting the espers to be safe and having faith in Andante despite Yoo-jin's efforts, he just up and left. And then from there, shit stopped making sense. It was such a waste. This was going to be a 5-star, must-re-read story for me, but it dropped to 3 stars only. I HATE when the bottom suddenly becomes stupid and refuses to listen to common sense to "spice things up". It's like the author doesn't trust the plot and the characters they created.










I checked on Ridibooks and this only has 6 chapters.